BRAINLIEST!!
Using this text, and this text only, you are going to make a claim about what you THINK the author’s purpose is. Then, once you make that claim, you are going to support it with at least two specific examples from the text.

Write out your paragraph(s) and submit them to your instructor.
1 SENTENCE IS NOT A PARAGRAPH
Example:

Adam Alter’s primary goal is to get teachers to stop using red pens when they grade assignments. We can see this through his evidence he presents in several ways. One appeal he makes is to the teacher’s desire to inspire or motivate their students. One specific example of how red pen might hurt students is when he explains that “the color red activates the right hemisphere of the frontal cortex, a pattern of brain activity that typically indicates ‘avoidance motivation.’”(172). This quote would appeal to teachers because most teachers are hoping to inspire their students to try new things, not crush them.

Another reason that goes along with the belief that Alter’s purpose is to get teachers to stop using red pens is when he explains how many more errors people find when using a red pen. That by itself isn’t necessarily enough, but he does go on to state, “unfortunately, red ink is a double-edged sword, also causing students to perform more poorly in the first place”(172). This word choice is something that teachers would not want to associate with their grading necessarily, so they might be inclined to put the red pen down.

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Answer 1

The author's purpose who is Adam Alter is to attempt to get teachers to stop using red pens to grade their students work. I believe he wants this is because the color red shows that the students have been assessed harshly when their work is covered in red ink. To me this isn't really important as it most likely only affects people in elementary school as they are more likely to express their feelings then people in secondary school. When speaking to my siblings on the topic to them the color red when grading work influences the mind that they made to many errors which resulted in their bad performances, as this may not make the most sense if you think about it in some religions the color red represents death and evil.

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Essay on 'Lesser number of female in politics'
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  The are an abundance of reasons as to why there aren't very many female politicians. One reason as to why is that there are still a fair amount of discrimination against not only women, but anyone who isn't white, male, and rich. That is a fact, especially with our current president. Not so long ago, women were to stay at home to cook, clean, and care for their children, while the husband worked.

  Another reason to this is women are just plain and simply looked down on. This makes women lose confidence, knowing that they might not even be listened to or be taken seriously. Women are thought of as "sensitive and too emotional", and so emotions should not be in the workforce, which is absurd.

  Most women that enter into politics are also more likely to not be accepted because most people today still actually believe that men should make the decisions for our country, because men simply no best.

 There are many things that can disprove everything mentioned above. We have had many women that changed lives and impacted our society. There are far too many incidents where the woman shaped history, and example being Rosa Parks. Woman are just as capable of doing anything else a man does, we all breathe, long and want, which makes us the same.

What does the detail you tapped in paragraph 1 explain how shadow got his name?
A. It explains that he seems spooky to people like a shadow.
B. It explains that he stays close to people like a shadow.
C. It explains that people notice his fur is dark like a shadow

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Answer: the answer is B

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explain dystopian setting with respect to the novel "The Giver"​

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Explanation:

In a dystopian setting like "The Giver", every single person is indistinguishable from another, so much so that it practically abolishes discrimination. However, this type of setting puts massive strains on individuality and since jobs are picked for every person in "The Giver", no one can harness their true potential, in whatever field they're skilled in. Emotions, the weather, almost everything is controlled by the Government, which leads to problems with the "perfect society" the Giver's government says they live in to the residents. No one really has "free will", and cannot live life to its fullest.

Write a brief paragraph using the terms evaporation, condensation, precipitation, and collection to explain the water cycle. Write your paragraph on paper or type it using a word processing program.

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Answer:

Hey there,

Water can evaporate from oceans, lakes ponds, streams, and puddles. This means that the water can pretty much float into the air, like it has a magnetic attraction to the clouds. These water droplets wrap themselves around dust and other irritants in the atmosphere. This is called condensation. Once clouds are formed, they keep collecting water until they are full. When clouds are full, they release water through precipitation. This means the water either falls in droplets again like rain or dew, or it freezes and falls as snow, sleet or hail. Fianally, collection is the process is where water collects to form puddles, or falls into streams, rivers, lakes or oceans.

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Credit Credible Discredit Creditor Credibility Incredible Incredulous Which common root word do all the words on the left use? "inc" "cred" "di" "red"

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Answer:

The common root word that they all have in common is "cred".

Explanation:

The root word "cred" is present in several words used in the English language. Some examples are: incredible, credulous, credential, credible, credence, and credit. "Cred" comes from Latin, and its original meaning is "believe". Notice how all the words that have "cred" as their root are somehow related to the sense of "believe". If something is incredible, that means it is hard to believe it is true. If you show your credentials, you are proving your identity, so that someone else will believe you are who you are.

Answer:

The answer is "cred" or even easier, B

Explanation:

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The first sentence is correct since to combine another subject with ‘and’ especially when you have a subject, verb, and idea, you need to add comma
The first one is correct

Is and a part of the fanboys​

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Answer:

No

Explanation:

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And

Nor

But

Or

Yet

So

Answer:

no there is no is

Explanation:

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What is the subject in this sentence?
The Navy's newest ship is call “The Instigator”.

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Answer:

The instigator is the subject

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The instigator is the subject hope it helps

What's the setting of the odyssey?

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Answer:

The setting of the story takes place at Mount Olympus, the home of the gods. ... During the flashback on Skheria when Odysseus relates the story of his wanderings, a number of other settings are described as Odysseus moves from Troy, through the Mediterranean, to Ogygia.

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Answer:

The setting of the story takes place at Mount Olympus, the home of the gods. ... During the flashback on Skheria when Odysseus relates the story of his wanderings, a number of other settings are described as Odysseus moves from Troy, through the Mediterranean, to Ogygia.

Explanation:

The majority of the Odyssey takes place on and around the Aegean Sea before concluding in Odysseus's kingdom of Ithaca.

Britsh behavior defines an effect the reader.
#1. doing several activities while reading.
#2. enjoying reading different types of text.
#3. always understanding the meaning of the text.
#4. using strategies to comprehend a text.​

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I don’t want I just want my points

Answer:

Its D   °∅ω∅°

Explanation:


Dana refers to her job as the “slave market”. What does she actually do?

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If this is referring to Dana from Kindred by Octavia Butler, she worked at a labor agency where she would be sent to do whatever she was wanted for. sweeping floors, doing dishes, etc.

Explanation:

I read this book for school.

Compare Professor McGonagall to Hagrid. How are they different? How are they alike?

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Answer:

Professor McGonagall and Hagrid both teach at Hogwarts.

Explanation:

Answer:

they are both in the order

hagrid got expelled

Explanation:

How do you think boxing makes Antonio and Felix different from the other guys in the neighborhood?​

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Answer:

They are physically different: Antonio is tall and lean while Felix is short and husky. They also have different hairstyles.

Explanation:

boxing is so important to the boys because they don't want to live in the bad part of town and they want to to the the golden gloves competition.

In Anne Frank: The Diary of a Young Girl, how does Anne respond to the complaints of the members of the Secret Annexe that she is spoiled?

a. She immediately changes her behavior to please the others because she hopes to lead by example.
b. She refuses to acknowledge that she is spoiled and resolves to prove to the others that she is not.
c. At first, she behaves even more petulantly, but later she tries to be more considerate of the others while remaining true to herself.
d. She confides the true meaning of her behavior to the others so that they will understand and accept her.

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The inference is that Anne respond to the complaints of the members of the Secret Annexe that she is spoiled as c. At first, she behaves even more petulantly, but later she tries to be more considerate of the others while remaining true to herself.

What is an inference

It should be noted that an inference simply means the conclusion that can be deduced based on the information that given in a passage.

In this case, the inference is that Anne respond to the complaints of the members of the Secret Annexe that she is spoiled as at first, she behaves even more petulantly, but later she tries to be more considerate of the others while remaining true to herself.

This was from Anne Frank: The Diary of a Young Girl. In conclusion, the correct option is C.

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Answer:

C. At first, she behaves even more petulantly, but later she tries to be more considerate of the others while remaining true to herself.

Explanation:

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Why Sleep?
Which quote supports the central ideas that sleep is vital to basic functioning
and to how people feel?
A
"We now know that sleep plays an essential role in learning,
memory and emotional well-being."
B
"Just as a good meal is made up of different kinds of food, a
good night requires different kinds of sleep."
C
"During the night, you pass through the different stages, from
lighter to deeper sleep and back again."
D
"Keep in mind that most teenagers need at least 9 hours of sleep
per night!"

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Your answer is A it is well explained
The answer is A just think about it

Do you like to celebrate festivals? Why? Give reasons​

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Answer:

Yes, I like to celebrate festivals.

Explanation:

Festivals are a celebration of ones culture or an opportunity to experience cultures different than your own in a fun way.

Answer:

Yes, there fun and creative i mean it kinda depends on the festival but some u can express urself and some ppl enjoy it. Ik that some ppl love to go to festivals to be less stressed, or to get something off there minds, or to meet up with someone they haven't seen in a while or something like that.

Explanation:

Which event happens first?
Read the paragraph.
"Where'd you find this pot roast, Ms. H.? In the gutter?!"
Dead silence. Amanda stared at me with her mouth
open. Ms. Howard frowned.
I had been sitting at the Howards' dinner table, trying to
think of something funny to say. I wanted to fit in with
my friend's family so badly. They were all hilarious,
cracking jokes throughout dinner.
Suddenly, it had hit me. I'd use my favorite comedian's
best tag line: "In the gutter?!" I thought it would be a
huge hit! Boy, was I wrong.
O Amanda's friend insults Ms. Howard's cooking.
O Amanda stares at the friend with her mouth open.
O Amanda's friend and her family are eating dinner.
Amanda's friend thinks her friend will use a
comedian's tag line

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Amandas friend and her family are eating dinner.

Answer:

c

Explanation:

On page 2 which idea is President Obama
elaborating on when he states that athletes
put in countless hours to possibly earn a
split-second victory?

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The third one I took the test but I-ready is good

Answer:

possibly the third one.

Explanation:

What is the time it takes the Earth to make one revolution around the sun called?
a equinox
b solstice
c solar year
d lunar year

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Answer:

Solar year

Explanation:

Answer:

c. Solar year

Explanation:

solar=sun

lunar=moon

Read the passage then answer the question below:

The Ornithopter

Many people know Leonardo da Vinci today as an artist, and it is true that he was indeed a great painter and sculptor, but he was also an inventor and one of the first individuals in recorded history to draft detailed plans for a flying machine.

In order to make a living, Leonardo often depended upon wealthy individuals who would commission work from him. That means they would hire him and pay him to create specific work they wanted. In 1482, when he was 30 years old, Leonardo heard of an opportunity to work for Ludovico Sforza, the Duke of Milan. The duke, however, did not want a painter; he wanted a military engineer to help him defend the city against its enemies. This was an excellent opportunity that would pay Leonardo well, but Leonardo was a peaceful man. He considered war to be “a beastly madness.” He preferred to make things of beauty.

Leonardo made the decision that he could tolerate making weapons if the resources the duke could provide would also allow him to create things he loved. He sent a letter to the duke detailing his skills in designing and building weapons. “I will assemble catapults, mangonels, trebuchets and other instruments of wonderful efficiency…I will make an infinite number of items for attack and defense,” he wrote.

Leonardo’s letter convinced the duke of his talents, and he got the job. He set about designing the weapons that the duke desired. But Leonardo was infinitely creative, always thinking of new things, new ideas—he could not be limited to weapons alone. One idea that he had not mentioned in his application was the ornithopter. It was not a weapon of war, and it was not something that the duke had asked for, but Leonardo went ahead and designed it anyway.

Leonardo was fascinated by the idea of flight. The word “ornithopter” comes from two words meaning “bird” and “wings.” And on first inspection, his plans resembled a bird’s wings attached to a human being’s arms. He concluded that a human being’s arms were neither strong enough nor light enough to stay in the air for long. So, his design included sets of foot pedals and levers that were operated with the hands. He created detailed plans and presented them to the duke, uncertain of how the duke would react to a design for which he didn’t ask.

As it turned out, the duke was very impressed with the ornithopter, but it wasn’t Leonardo’s innovation that excited him. He immediately thought of the ways this machine could be used in war. If a spy could fly over the enemy’s camp, imagine what information he could gather! This was not what Leonardo had intended for his beautiful flying machine.

But how Leonardo felt about war turned out not to matter in the end. His ornithopter was never built—along with his designs for tanks, parachutes, diving suits, machine guns, and even robots that he created for the duke. The ideas of Leonardo da Vinci were centuries ahead of the technology needed to make them.

He concluded that a human being's arms were neither strong enough nor light enough to stay in the air for long. So, his design included foot pedals and levers that were operated with the hands.

Which type of conflict is expressed in this excerpt?



Question 8 options:

individual vs. society


individual vs. individual


individual vs. self


individual vs. nature

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Answer:

individual vs. self . .

Can someone recommend any happy vibes songs for school project and it’s appropriate please?

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Chill music?

I suggest jazz

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What's the theme in the short story the interlopers?

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Answer:

One theme of "The Interlopers" is the dominance of nature over man. Although the von Gradwitz and Znaeym families have been feuding for generations over a narrow strip of forest, nature triumphs over both. Thus, the two men are the true interlopers in a domain that cannot actually be controlled by any man.

Explanation:

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Which sentence includes a gerund?



Roger was dancing with everyone on the dance floor.



Her only regret was playing the role of the villain.



Lucy is going to the party, as well.



Dancing in the play was a dream come true for Maggie.

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Answer:

I aint never seen two pretty best freinds

Explanation:

always one of then gotta be ugly

A playwright such as Shakespeare has to rely primarily on _______ for character development

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Answer:

Dialogue and actions.

Explanation:

Plays are not books. The only ways the audience can witness and appreciate character development for a character is through their dialogue (the things they say) and their actions (how they respond to conflict and move through the plot).

Which statement best expresses one theme of "To Live"?

The lessons learned in school can help you overcome life’s difficulties.
The business of everyday life can make it difficult to discover who you really are.
Being a part of two different cultures makes you more aware of your identity.
Thinking about your future will help you decide what you want to be.

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Answer:

Sorry for being 5 days late but the correct answer is:

B. The business of everyday life can make it difficult to discover who you really are

Explanation:

Answer:

i believe the answer is B.

Explanation:

The business of everyday life can make it difficult to discover who you really are.

Which to details from The Lighted Window denlop the theme?
Then I passed on
Shone from a huddied shop
o Patrencally gaudy and cheap
A confusion of color
ם ם ם ב
Once more these things were treasures
o Thinking of all my problems that never are solved

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Answer:

23

Explanation:

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understanding of Texts socially, culturally, geographically, and historically constructed.
In a multi-paragraph journal!

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Answer:

You need to give me more information then I can answer, this question doesn't really make sense. What texts are you talking about?

what ironic situation does Shapiro describe in paragraph 3?​

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Hi, you've asked an incomplete question. Here's the remaining part of the question containing paragraph 3 (The Lessons of Salem  by Laura Shapiro).

"He was right: even now the Salem witch trials haunt the imaginations of hundreds of thousands of Americans, tourists, and history buffs alike, who visit Salem for a glimpse of our Puritan past at its most chilling. This year  "Salem is getting more attention than ever: the city is sponsoring an array of programs commemorating the Tercentenary, including dramatizations of the trials and symposiums of the legal and medical aspects of identifying witches in the 17th century. With the participation of such organizations as Amnesty International, the Tercentenary has placed a special emphasis on human rights and the role of the individual conscience in times of terror. In 1692, those who “confessed” to witchcraft were spared; only those who insisted on their innocence were hanged. Earlier this month a memorial to the victims was unveiled and on that occasion, the first annual Salem Award, created to honor a significant contribution to social justice, was presented to Gregory Allen Williams of  Inglewood, Calif. In the midst of the Los Angeles riots last spring, Williams, who is black, risked his life to save an Asian-American attacked by a mob.

Explanation:

Remember, the term ironic situation is used when a situation where an action brings about an unexpected effect no one imagined would occur. In other words, the resulting outcome is different from what was expected.

For example, Shapiro stated, "Salem is getting more attention than ever: the city is sponsoring an array of programs commemorating the Tercentenary [three hundredth anniversisary], including dramatizations of the trials and symposiums of the legal and medical aspects of identifying witches in the 17th century."

This is an ironic situuation because we learned from the previous paragraphs that those accused of been witches or devils were killed in other to stop the spread of such actions or kind of thinking. However, the very actions that were once condemned have become the subject of attention, with dramatizations of the trials, etc.

The Counterpoint author argues that most people don’t believe in the honesty of social media-based relationships mainly because .

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Hello, you did not show the text to which this question refers, which makes it impossible for me to give you an exact answer.

However, a counterargument that states that most people do not believe in the honesty of relationships based on social networks, says that this disbelief is created, mainly because on social networks anyone can pretend to be something they are not and start a relationship like that form. Therefore, the author states that since we do not know the real self of a person on social networks, we cannot believe in the honesty of relationships based on those same social networks.

can someone give me music recommendations plspls

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Answer:

nf

Explanation:

Juice Wrld, ski mask is ok, Eminem, trip lee, Tyla Yaweh, Naomi wild, Iaan Dior, YNW Melly, Joyner Lucas, Trevor Daniel, The weekend, NF,
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