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My Hero Project

Heroes are everywhere around us. A lot of kids look up to heroes because they save lives, they are wonderful role models, and they are great examples of good people. Some of the main heroes we see today are police officers, firefighters, doctors, and many more. I have made up my own hero. His name is Reyota and he gets his powers from the greek gods. He is very powerful and he can harness his powers from any humans, or objects. Reyota goes on a magical journey to defeat his evil spirits. He uses his powers to guide him through the way. His mother is being held captive and he is trying to save her. This makes him a hero because he goes on a journey to help someone in need that he truly cares about.

One day a hero was born, Reyota. He was always making friends and cherished his mom so much. He was playing with his friend, Michael and they were playing in the backyard and Reyota’s mom was bringing them lemonade since it was really hot outside. “Kids I have some lemonade for you guys!”, Reyota’s Mom exclaimed. The kids ran from the treehouse to get their lemonade, ‘thanks Mom!” Reyota exclaimed. The children had loved the taste of the lemonade. ‘Wow, your Mom makes fantastic lemonade”, Michaeal said. “Thanks! I’ll tell her later.”, Reyota replied. They finished up the lemonade before they were about to head back to the treehouse. Then suddenly a black hole appeared out of thin air. Reyota’s Mom had come outside to check on the children but she was pulled into the black hole by this transparent thing that had a weird, domestic face. She had been gone for over a week. Reyota kept thinking of ways to save her but nothing worked. He went outside to get his mail but then a huge cloud struck over him. “BOOM!”, The thunder roared. Reyota was sunken into the clouds. He saw a giant person standing there, watching him. He also saw a big city and the air smelled wonderful.

“Hello Reyota, I’m Zeus, God of Thunder. I noticed that your mom was captured.”, Zeus said. “Well yes, but what do you want with me?”, Reyota asked. “Your special and your mom was captured by your evil spirits.”, Zues said. “I'm special? What do you mean by that?”, Reyota asked. “What I mean by that is, is that you were born with a special power. Didn’t your mom tell you?, Zeus asked. “No but that’s really cool! But what are my powers exactly?”, Reyota begged. “Your powers are out of this world. You can fly and harness anyone’s powers around you.”, Zeus explained. So Zeus trained Reyota how to fight and how to use his powers so he could save his Mom.

Reyota had grown to be older and he became best friends with Zeus. Reyota’s mom had been stuck in the underworld by Reyota’s evil spirits. He went on a quest to the underworld to rescue his mom. He was walking in a strange forest when he came across this hairy beast. “Who are you and what are you doing here!”, The beast demanded. “I’m looking for my mother”, Reyota said. “Oh…” The beast said. “She was captured by my evil spirits.” Reyota mentioned. The beast showed Reyota a magic mirror that reveals the future. Reyota saw his mom being tortured. He was astonished but he thanked the beast for showing him what they were doing to his mother. He left the forest and he was ready to find his mother.
Reyota found himself being in an ice kingdom. There was a huge ice castle. He thought to himself, how will I pass through this monster, I can do this. I just have to use my powers wisely. He touched the ground full of ice and he felt all tingly inside but he felt stronger, He fought the beast and defeated him with ease. He went into the castle but he saw these blue creatures.

The creatures were called the “snow keepers.” He asked them how to get through the underworld but they said he had to speak to the queen. He walked up to her and he saw her sitting in a tall, enormous, icy, throne. He bowed to her to show his respect. He asked her how to get to the underworld and she said, “walk down to the third corridor and take two steps to the left and you should find a portal to the underworld”, The Queen said. “Thank you,” Reyota replied. He followed her instructions and made it out of the castle. He entered it and his mom was screaming. He removed the chains that were tied around her neck. He rescued her and took her back to earth. “Wow, thanks for rescuing me son.” she said as they were flying in the air. “I missed you so much mom” he said. “I missed you too,” she replied. Reyota flew back into the clouds after he kissed his mom goodbye. This was truly his new life.
Reyota was brave. He saved his mom and his plan went through its course. This makes him a hero because he goes on a journey to help someone in need that he truly cares about. Reyota’s real journey had just begun.

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No Need

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It's perfect


Related Questions

If John spent an average of $5 on each pack of cigarettes, how much would he spend each year on cigarettes? (Hint: there are 365 days in a year.)

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Answer:

John would be spending $1,825 each year on  Cigarettes

Explanation:

Yeah the answer is 1,825 it’s just 365•5 and that’s it



Why were Jem and Scout welcomed at Calpurnia's church?

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Answer:

Scout and Jem receive a warm welcome by the First Purchase African M.E. congregation because their father is valiantly defending one of their community members.

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Use what you have learned from reading "The Bike" by Gary Soto to analyze how the author's use of figurative language and imagery impact the story. Be sure to use text evidence to support your answer.

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Answer:

The authors use of imagery impacts the story by making you imagine what is happening in the story so it helps you to relate. The author's use of figurative language can help to enhance the emotional significance of the story.

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Write a story based on this image ​

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Answer:

I went down to the shop today and I needed to by something form the supermarket when  I picked up, what I needed and went to pay. The lady who worked there was very generous and helped me take it home, but on the way home I just claps and my legs just went I couldn't stand up or even move, 'am I paralysed' I said. the lady said 'no, but we do need to take you to the hospital I will take you to my car that is just around the corner' as we drove down I felt cold and as if my soul was leaving my body but I hanged on for dear life it was something bout that woman that I couldn't put my finger on. i said to her 'you don't have to stay you have a job you don't have to stay with and old lady like me.' she held my hand as I went she started crying but you my have just known if you stay with some one even for five minutes you will get to know the person who there really are.

 

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the wild robot by peter brown what is the mood of the section titled the otters? in the boook The Wild Robot

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Answer: Curios

Explanation: The chapter the Otters is when the robot has just came to the island. So she is feeling curious. Btw I love that book!

What makes our society different than a Totalitarian society?

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Totalitarian is all ran from the government. To put it in perspective, Hitler achieved Totalitarianism in order to try and have complete control. Examples of how Totalitarianism is different would be having a dictatorship, censorship of media, mandatory military sign up, secret police forces, control of reproduction of population, targeting specific religious/ political groups, etc.

Which part of speech is "long" in the sentence below? My grandmother loved to take long walks in the woods with me.

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Answer:

an adverb

Explanation:

Indeed, an adverb is one of the parts of speech in the English language. Basically, it is often used to modify verbs or groups of words in a sentence by telling us about the time, place, manner, or degree of what is been said.

So in this example, the word "long" acts as an adverb that modifies the verb "walk". In other words, it tells us the degree of walk the grandmother takes with her grandchild. Thus, the degree of the walk they used to have is expressed.

Given a prompt, write a thesis for an explanatory essay: Explain why a school might have a dress code.

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Schools need a dress code for the safety of other students, privacy, and to help other students be more on task

Read the excerpt from Animal Farm and the passage on the history of the Soviet Union.

In glowing sentences he painted a picture of Animal Farm as it might be when sordid labour was lifted from the animals' backs. His imagination had now run far beyond chaff-cutters and turnip-slicers. Electricity, he said, could operate threshing machines, ploughs, harrows, rollers, and reapers and binders, besides supplying every stall with its own electric light, hot and cold water, and an electric heater. By the time he had finished speaking, there was no doubt as to which way the vote would go. But just at this moment Napoleon stood up and, casting a peculiar sidelong look at Snowball, uttered a high-pitched whimper of a kind no one had ever heard him utter before.

At this there was a terrible baying sound outside, and nine enormous dogs wearing brass-studded collars came bounding into the barn. They dashed straight for Snowball, who only sprang from his place just in time to escape their snapping jaws. In a moment he was out of the door and they were after him. Too amazed and frightened to speak, all the animals crowded through the door to watch the chase. Snowball was racing across the long pasture that led to the road. He was running as only a pig can run, but the dogs were close on his heels. Suddenly he slipped and it seemed certain that they had him. Then he was up again, running faster than ever, then the dogs were gaining on him again. One of them all but closed his jaws on Snowball's tail, but Snowball whisked it free just in time. Then he put on an extra spurt and, with a few inches to spare, slipped through a hole in the hedge and was seen no more.

During the second half of the 1920s, Joseph Stalin set the stage for gaining absolute power by employing police repression against opposition elements within the Communist Party. The machinery of coercion had previously been used only against opponents of Bolshevism, not against party members themselves. The first victims were Politburo members Leon Trotskii, Grigorii Zinov'ev, and Lev Kamenev, who were defeated and expelled from the party in late 1927.

How does the conflict in the Animal Farm excerpt relate to the events in the historical passage?

Snowball's quick escape under the hedge is similar to how Stalin was expelled.
Snowball’s ideas about work relate to the Stalin’s efforts to gain total control.
Napoleon removes Snowball for his own purposes just as Stalin removed those in his own party.
Snowball's dream for the animals on the farm is the same as the dream of the Communist Party.

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Answer:

Napoleon removes Snowball for his own purposes just as Stalin removed those in his own party.

Explanation:

"Animal farm" was written to be a great political allegory, pointing out sutuations of hypocrisy, seizure of power, inefficiency and abuse of authority between real political luders and their disastrous achievements in their countries.

This book directly refers to the history of societal union and shows how Stalin did not even consider his own allies in order to maintain his national power and dominance. This can be seen when Napoleon removes Snowball for his own purposes, just as Stalin removed those from his own party.

Select one:
O Rhyme gives the rhyming words a different meaning
O Rhyme creates an engaging sound effect
O Rhyme makes the lines easier to remember
O Rhyme emphasizes the argument of the poem​

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The second answer! It creates an engaging sound effect :)

how did hellen fund her trip polar dream​

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Answer:

Helen Thayer raised the fund for her trip with her husband, Bill Thayer.

Explanation:

Since no organized group was going to fund Helen Thayer who was already fifty at the time on a journey to the Polar region alone, Helen Thayer had to raise the funds for her trip which amounted to about $10,000 with her husband.

Helen embarked on the solo trip with her dog, Charlie which could scare off polar bears. On March 30, 1988, Helen Thayer became the first woman to trek solo the North Pole.

alone we can do so little, together we can do so much.

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Answer:

so true so true

Explanation:

What feature of prose shares the same purpose as a stanza of poetry?

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There are no answer choices so I can't be sure exactly what you're looking for, but I'd say paragraph.

A stanza is a group of lines forming the basic recurring metrical unit in a poem, used to separate topics and build a piece of poetry neatly. A paragraph is a distinct section of a piece of writing, usually dealing with a single theme and indicated by a new line, indentation, or numbering. Paragraphs separate thoughts and topics and are a building block for an essay or prose.

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“At its best, hip-hop lays bare
the empty moral cupboard
that is our generation's
legacy.” Whats the meaning what is the author trying to say?

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Answer:

In his concluding paragraph on "Hip Hop World", McBride describes hip hop as being a warning. Hip hop, as we know it, has evolved heavily from the era that McBride was recalling. However, the message of hip hop being a warning towards the older generations is still crystal clear.  

There was one specific line in that concluding paragraph that caught my eye and lends a solid foundations towards McBride's arguement. "At its best, hip hop lays bare the empty moral cupboard that is our generation's legacy". Hip hop was a way for African Americans to voice the discrimination and injustices against them. They used their music as a revolutionary movement, giving voice to their struggles and finding another home within their community. By laying bare all that had happened from the beginning of hip hop in the seventies up until 2007, McBride illustrated just how important it was that African Americans were given this gift to cry out and say "We are here".  

Hip hop was also a warning in the way that it connected with so many people. It became a worldwide hit among the youth. Even white American teens struggling with poor families were able to relate to African Americans within their verses. This could be seen as a warning to the older generations that our generation will not tolerate the injustices thrust upon us. The youth has always been looked down upon and hated for being different. Since hip hop gave such a powerful voice to the youth, that is why it was so hard for McBride and others of his generation to accept that hip hop would be a cultural phenomenon. I think it is easy for older generations to underestimate and mistreat those of younger generations. They believe that we are not capable of maintaining whatever system that the old generations developed. Different influences from different time periods further separate the young from the old. But with hip hop, it gives the youth a chance to stand their ground and fight for what they believe is right.

How do you evaluate the FBI’s decision to monitor activist groups? Is the result of fear of experience? F.B.I. Watched Activist Groups, New Files Show

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Answer:

You may know someone in this country who has radical beliefs or agrees with the actions or ideologies of violent extremist groups. That is their right under the U.S. Constitution. However, if a person seriously plans to carry out an act of violence or is strongly pushing you or someone else to do so, that is illegal.

Explanation:

what is a subject and predicate plz define and use examples plz

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Answer:

The parts of the sentence are a set of terms for describing how people construct sentences from smaller pieces. There is not a direct correspondence between the parts of the sentence and the parts of speech -- the subject of a sentence, for example, could be a noun, a pronoun, or even an entire phrase or clause. Like the parts of speech, however, the parts of the sentence form part of the basic vocabulary of grammar, and it is important that you take some time to learn and understand them.

Explanation:

The complete subject tells whom or what the sentence is about. For example; The house, The red car, or The great teacher. The complete predicate tells what the subject is or does. For example; (The house) is white, (The red car) is fast, or (The great teacher) likes students.

Answer:

A subject tells who or what the sentence is about

a predicate tells what the subject is or does

Explanation:

example:

Mr. Rick took a walk.

Rick is a subject

took a walk is a predicate

example:

The kids are eating lunch

Kids is the subject

are eating lunch is the predicate

1. My dad was an angry beast when I brought home my poor
report card.
_____ is compared to _____

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Answer:

my dad is compared to an angry beast

What are 3 claims that prove Goldilocks was a criminal

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Answer:

(1) breaking and entering; (2) theft, and (3) destruction of property.

Explanation:

I need three reasons on why I should be able to eat in my room, for my essay. plz help I am giving 15 points, and brainlest.

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Answer:

Cuase it will be easy to eat and paly

Explanation:

which sentence.option correctly uses a semicolon​

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Answer:

C

Explanation:

You use semicolons to connect 2 short sentences.

Who wrote escape to last man peak​

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Answer:

Escape to Last Man Peak

Novel by Jean D'Costa

Explanation:

Read an excerpt from "Television and the Public Interest" and answer the question. The speech was delivered by Newton N. Minow, chairman of the Federal Communications Commission, to the nation’s television executives in 1961.

[1] … But when television is bad, nothing is worse. I invite each of you to sit down in front of your television set when your station goes on the air and stay there, for a day, without a book, without a magazine, without a newspaper, without a profit and loss sheet or a rating book to distract you. Keep your eyes glued to that set until the station signs off. I can assure you that what you will observe is a vast wasteland.

[2] You will see a procession of game shows, formula comedies about totally unbelievable families, blood and thunder, mayhem, violence, sadism, murder, western bad men, western good men, private eyes, gangsters, more violence, and cartoons. And endlessly, commercials—many screaming, cajoling, and offending. And most of all, boredom. True, you'll see a few things you will enjoy. But they will be very, very few. And if you think I exaggerate, I only ask you to try it.

[3] Is there one person in this room who claims that broadcasting can't do better? Well a glance at next season's proposed programming can give us little heart. Of 73 and 1/2 hours of prime evening time, the networks have tentatively scheduled 59 hours of categories of action-adventure, situation comedy, variety, quiz, and movies. Is there one network president in this room who claims he can't do better?

[4] The best estimates indicate that during the hours of 5 to 6 P.M. sixty percent of your audience is composed of children under twelve. And most young children today, believe it or not, spend as much time watching television as they do in the schoolroom. I repeat—let that sink in, ladies and gentlemen—most young children today spend as much time watching television as they do in the schoolroom. It used to be said that there were three great influences on a child: home, school, and church. Today, there is a fourth great influence, and you ladies and gentlemen in this room control it.

[5] If parents, teachers, and ministers conducted their responsibilities by following the ratings, children would have a steady diet of ice cream, school holidays, and no Sunday school. What about your responsibilities? Is there no room on television to teach, to inform, to uplift, to stretch, to enlarge the capacities of our children? Is there no room for programs deepening their understanding of children in other lands? There are some fine children's shows, but they are drowned out in the massive doses of cartoons, violence, and more violence. Must these be your trademarks? Search your consciences and see if you cannot offer more to your young beneficiaries whose future you guide so many hours each and every day …

[6] You must provide a wider range of choices, more diversity, more alternatives. It is not enough to cater to the nation's whims; you must also serve the nation's needs. And I would add this: that if some of you persist in a relentless search for the highest rating and the lowest common denominator, you may very well lose your audience. Because … the people are wise, wiser than some of the broadcasters—and politicians—think.

Which two sentences provide evidence that what is on television is a "vast wasteland"?

a) "You will see a procession of game shows … blood and thunder, mayhem, violence, sadism, murder … private eyes, gangsters, more violence, and cartoons." (paragraph 2)
b) "I repeat—let that sink in, ladies and gentlemen—most young children today spend as much time watching television as they do in the schoolroom." (paragraph 4)
C) "There are some fine children's shows, but they are drowned out in the massive doses of cartoons, violence, and more violence." (paragraph 5)
d) "Search your consciences and see if you cannot offer more to your young beneficiaries whose future you guide so many hours each and every day …" (paragraph 5)
E) "And I would add this: that if some of you persist in a relentless search for the highest rating and the lowest common denominator, you may very well lose your audience." (paragraph 6)

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Answer:

a and c

Explanation:

These quotes show detail about the negative things on TV that in turn cause it to become a wasteland instead of having something positive to offer such as an educational program.

Q2. In both Seascape With Sun And Eagle and Deep Green the speakers present
nature. What are the similarities and/or differences between the ways the poets
present these attitudes?

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I like what k see g suénense

Answer:

loser

Explanation:

Based on this depiction of Archimedes, how do you think he would have responded to de sponde’s poem?

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Answer: he would have responded with a sad feeling since the author was making this before  he died and the reader here is writing how he misses him

Explanation:

A compound sentence contains _____.

a single dependent clause
two complete sentences
a single complete sentence
two dependent clauses

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Answer:

two dependent clauses

Explanation:

becuase i looked it up

How to summarize articles?

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Answer:

1. Identify the Main Idea or Topic The aim of an article is to convey a certain idea or topic through the use of exposition and logic. ...

2.Identify Important Arguments At this point in the preparation process, you should read the article again. This time, read more carefully. ...

3.Write Your Summary Explanation: feel free to mark brainliest

Answer: State the main ideas of the article. Identify the most important details that support the main ideas. Write your summary in your own words; avoid copying phrases and sentences from the article unless they're direct quotations. Express the underlying meaning of the article, not just the superficial details

Explanation:

REVIEW: A verb phrase contains a main verb plus the auxiliary (or helping) verbs needed to convey the tense and other nuances.


DIRECTIONS: CHOOSE THE CORRECT VERB PHRASE IN EACH SENTENCE.

SENTENCE: The team should have won the game on Thursday.

a
won the game
b
the team
c
should have won
d
the game on Thursday

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Answer:

C. should have won would be your phrase

Explanation:

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Ranjita said to me,"I come with you". into indirect speech​

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Answer:

Whats the question

Explanation:

Ranjita told me that she could not come with me

In at least 2-3 sentences, write what the quote means to you, or what it makes you think of.

QUOTE: "Challenge isn’t going to come from any curriculum. No matter how hard they make it. It’s going to come from life." –Gordan Korman, Ungifted

RESPONSE:

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Explanation:

Life is harder then any challenge you face in school. It simply gets you ready for the real world or life.

Answer:“Challenge isn't going to come from any curriculum, no matter how hard they make it. It's going to come from life.”

Explanation:

keep on going man, god knows what's right

What is nonessential information in a sentence called?​

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Use a comma (or a pair of commas) to set off elements that are nonessential (also called nonrestrictive). A phrase or clause is nonessential if it can be removed without changing the main idea of the sentence; a nonessential element just adds a relatively unimportant detail.

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Answer: A phrase or clause is nonessential if it can be removed without changing the main idea of the sentence; a nonessential element just adds a relatively unimportant detail.

Explanation:

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