judy asked sarah to help her edit the following paragraph. identify the correct example of EDITING

“Tony and Mark decided to open a coffe shop on the corner of elm Street and 8th Avenue. Much to their shock, in the first week Tony and Mark made no sales and begin to worry if their business endeavor was a smart one With $10,000 dollars from the bank the two men purchase all the supplies needed to begin their first week. After a little advertisng and free samples, the shop is doing much better.”

A sarah corrects the spelling of the word advertising in the last sentence

B Sarah informs Judy that the essay is not organized properly

C Sarah suggests to Judy that she have a solid thesis statement

D Sarah suggests to Judy that the paragraph should be coherent

* i typed everything word for word hence the spelling mistakes
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Answer:

D

Explanation:

That was my best answer if it is wrong I am so sorry!

Answer: A) Sarah corrects the spelling of the word advertising in the last sentence.

Explanation:

Which statement best describes how Boxer’s response supports the author’s purpose?

Boxer’s anger shows how the working class could be the leaders of a revolution.
Boxer’s defiance shows how the working class could not be swayed by propaganda.
Boxer’s acceptance shows how the working class could be manipulated by those in power.
Boxer’s agreement with Squealer shows how the working class was equal to the upper class.

is this sentence a phrase or a clause "throughout the entire school system"​

Diary of a wimpy kid Hard luck

What was Greg’s biggest problem with the Abigail situation?

A. Rowley had told her Greg's most embarrassing secrets.

B. She stayed at his house every day after school until her mom picked her up.

C. Rowley walked to school with her instead of with him.

D. She sat at his desk in all his classes so she could be closer to Rowley.

1. She worked for a man. The man used to be an athlete.
2. They called a lawyer. The lawyer lived nearby.
3. I sent an email to my brother. My brother lives in Australia.
4. The customer liked the waitress. The waitress was very friendly,
5. We broke the computer. The computer belonged to my father.

Part A Based on the beginning of "To Build a Fire," which inference can be made about the man? O He is lacking in deep thoughts or feelings. O The man questions the honesty of those around him. O The man trusts the dog more than he trusts himself O He is accustomed to the frigid temperatures.​

This sentence is most likely which component of an expository essay?
For example, most people are familiar with the shredded-cabbage salad known
as coleslaw, but many other foods can also be made into tasty slaws, including
carrots, broccoli, and even apples,
2 of 3 QUESTIONS
Concluding sentence
Supporting detail
Topic sentence
Thesis statement

Jerry will be going to the shops today.

Subject: (blank 1)

Verb: (blank 2)

Read the excerpt below and answer the question
And in some perfumes is there more delight Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks
The above lines are an example of:

A. a couplet
B. metaphor
C. simile
D. volta​

Help please!
Select the sentence that has the correct punctuation.

A. Warning all the campers: the ranger was trapped by the flood.
B. Warning all the campers, the ranger was trapped by the flood.

What type of figurative language is used in this line "please close that door."

State your claim on ONE way you think your generation can change the way other young people are taught to view race and be tolerant of others.

Choose the response that shows the commas in the appropriate.
The engineer admired the smooth workings of the large complex shiny gears in the machinery.
a. The engineer admired the smooth workings of the large, complex, shiny gears in the machinery.
b. The engineer admired the smooth workings, of the large, complex shiny gears in the machinery.
Correct
C.

Q: How does an author use conflict and characters to create satire?
Please Help ASAP

Read the excerpt from The Crisis, Number I by Thomas Paine.

“I once felt all that kind of anger, which a man ought to feel, against the mean principles that are held by the Tories: a noted one, who kept a tavern at Amboy, was standing at his door, with as pretty a child in his hand, about eight or nine years old, as I ever saw, and after speaking his mind as freely as he thought was prudent, finished with this unfatherly expression, ‘Well! give me peace in my day.’ Not a man lives on the continent but fully believes that a separation must some time or other finally take place, and a generous parent should have said, ‘If there must be trouble, let it be in my day, that my child may have peace;’ and this single reflection, well applied, is sufficient to awaken every man to duty.”

Which is a central idea of this excerpt?

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Mississippi Trial, 1955 study guide questions
Who is "Bobo"? Briefly explain Hiram's encounter with him.

2. Laura is into f
and she's good at drawing dress sketches​

Read the excerpt from Kamar's speech.
It's always been hard to fill teaching positions for certain subjects, such as math and science. Because of the specialized nature of these
subjects, fewer people are qualified to teach them than are qualified to teach more general subjects. School districts have wrestled with this
problem for a long time. Now, some of them are coming up with creative solutions and finding success in doing so. Some districts have loosened
the requirements for teaching certain subjects. In these districts, teachers can teach subjects even if they are not certified for them. Other districts
pay more to teachers of certain subjects, and still others offer signing bonuses for teachers with specific certifications.
Which sentence should Kamar add to his speech to inform his audience about teaching requirements?
01.
Most teachers enter the profession when they are in their twenties.
2. Signing bonuses can be as much as $20,000 for some science and math subjects.
3. Some states might loosen requirements because they have the greatest growth in student populations.
4. The process for getting certified to teach most often starts with earning a bachelor of arts in education.

1.
In paragraph 5, the narrator's mother can best be described as –
A
hopeful
B
distraught
resentful
D
honest

Were they carrying bags?
=> were bags being carried by them?

Which two events bring about the resolution of the story?
Audrey uses the pen on Erica to stop the allergic reaction.
Erica gathers her things before heading to the pool.
Audrey watches Erica's things and looks for people she knows.
Erica and Audrey argue about who is slower.
Erica's mother insists she bring Audrey to the pool with her.

Fill in the blank with the word that best fits the definition below: doing something in order to learn.

What was the Red Scare? Why was it significant?

Write an sentence with active verbs

at the beginning of the story, what does the narrator say that disease has done to him. in the tell tale heart by edgar poe​

What is the best way to read?

What are the negative and positive effects of ethnocentrism?​

What is language in which specific words show an exact meaning based on context?(1 point)

general language

vocabulary words

concise wording

precise language

HELP!!! 15! POINTS
Which transition word or phrase indicates that the writer is comparing and contrasting?
similarly
in addition
to clarify
accordingly

What does forestall mean in paragraph 6