Identify syntactical errors in this numbered excerpt. Identify answers to the question 1-6 and rewrite the excerpt fixing all the errors and compose justification of your rewrite in a paragraph or so.



(1) recently a report came out in a science magazine that claimed the earth’s protective ozone layer was being steadily depleted. (2) It names several companies that produced chemicals responsible for this situation and consumers were advised by it to boycott these businesses. (3) An editorial in a business magazine insisted that this report was faulty. (4) It states that there could be other, less dangerous reasons for the changes in climate that we’ve been experiencing. (5) However, I believe that the scientists are right, we should all consider the effect we can have on making sure the ozone layer is not harmed more that it already has been.



(6) In the past few decades, the ozone layer has been steadily depleted. (7) This means harmful ultraviolet rays get through to our atmosphere. (8) People who do these bad things which contribute to this situation should know that their actions could harm future generations. (9) Not buying products that are harmful to the ozone layer means our children’s children will be more secure. (10) Consumers can choose to purchase any kind of product they desire. (11) They should be aware of what happens when they make their choices. (12) If they don’t boycott companies that produce harmful substances, our atmosphere will steadily worsen.



1) Consider the essay as a whole, which is the best edit for the sentence in section 2

a) As it is now

b) It names several companies that produced chemical responsible for this situation and advises consumers

c) Naming several companies that produce chemicals responsible for this situation, consumers are advised by the report

d) It is naming several companies that produce chemicals responsible for this situation and advising consumers

e) The report named several companies that produced chemicals responsible for this situation, and advised consumers



2) Consider the essay as a whole, which is the best edit for section 3?

a) The report was faulty, an editorial in a business magazine insisted, it stated

b) An editorial in a business magazine insisted that this report was faulty, stating

c) In an editorial in a business magazine was the insistence that the report was faulty and

d) The editorial in a business magazine insists that the consumers were faulty,

e) Insisting that the report was faulty, an editorial in a business magazine states



3) The phrase "do these bad things," in sentence 8 can be made clearer in relation to the content of the essay if it is edited as...

a) exacerbate the situations

b) don’t participate in events

c) are in need of services

d) use the types of chemicals

e) consider options



4) Which is the best version of the sentences 10 and 11?

a) As it is now

b) Evidently, consumers can choose to purchase any kind of product they desire. If they would just be aware

c) Consumers can definitely choose to purchase any kind of product they desire; in spite

d) Consumers can definitely choose to purchase any kind of product they desire, but they should be aware

e) While consumers can choose to purchase any kind of product they desire, they are also aware



5) Which of the following words of phrases best replaces the word they in sentence 12?

a) workers

b) future generations

c) consumers

d) chemical industries

e) editors



6) What sentence most clearly represents the main idea of the writer?

a) I understand now how the scientists who wrote the report are right.

b) From now on, consumers must refuse to buy products that threaten the ozone layer and the heath and safety of all of us.

c) In conclusion, we all have to watch out for each other.

d) All of us have to find ways to maintain integrity in our economic choices.

e) Businesses are responsible for the safety of their products.

1. We can deduce here that the best edit for the sentence in section 2 is: A. As it is now.

2. Also, the best edit for section 3 is: B) An editorial in a business magazine insisted that this report was faulty, stating

3. The phrase "do these bad things," in sentence 8 can be made clearer in relation to the content of the essay if it is edited as... D. use the types of chemicals.

4. The best version of the sentences 10 and 11 is: A) As it is now.

5. The words of the phrases that best replaces the word "they" in sentence 12 is: C. Consumers.

6. We can infer here that the sentence that most clearly represents the main idea of the writer is: B. From now on, consumers must refuse to buy products that threaten the ozone layer and the heath and safety of all of us.

Main idea actually refers to the central idea or thought that a writer or author is passing across to the readers. It can also include the theme.

We see that in the given passage, the answers have been properly answered.

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Robert has been given access to his company’s website and wants to add several songs that he believes will provide great background music for the marketing of certain products. Does Robert need to check the copyright status of the music he wishes to use?

A. Yes, he needs to check the copyright status of the music and get permission from the creator if it has been copyrighted.

B. No, he is not trying to resell the music, only use it as background noise.

Read the passage and then answer the question: Some bugs have six legs. Beetles, ants, and bees have six legs. Some bugs have eight legs. Spiders and ticks have eight legs. Some bugs have lots of legs. Centipedes and millipedes have lots of legs. Which phrase best describes the intended audience of the passage? A. Young adults B. Pet owners C. Rich people D. Small children​

Which of these would you select as an effective thesis statement for your introductory paragraph of an interpretive essay on Emily Bronte’s novel “Wuthering Heights”? A. In the book "Wuthering Heights," Emily Bronte’s characters attempt to challenge traditional class structures. B. The main love story in Emily Bronte’s book, "Wuthering Heights," revolves around the passionate relationship between Heathcliff and Catherine. C. In the book "Wuthering Heights," the moors are the one place where Heathcliff and Catherine can be themselves. D. Nelly, the narrator in Emily Bronte’s book, "Wuthering Heights," is able to describe what is happening at Wuthering Heights and Thrushcross Grange.

The author most likely included this paragraph to

Read the paragraph from The Hot Zone.

Jerry Jaax was going to be the first man in, the point man. He had decided to take with him one of his officers, Captain Mark Haines, a former Green Beret. He was a short, intense man with a whipcord body who had been through the Green Berets' scuba-diving school. He had jumped out of airplanes at night into the open sea, wearing scuba gear. ("I'll tell you one thing," Haines once said to me. "I don't do scuba diving for fun as a civilian. The majority of my diving has been in the Middle East.") Captain Haines was not a man who would get claustrophobia and go into a panic in a space suit. Furthermore, Captain Haines was a veterinarian. He understood monkeys.

persuade the reader that Captain Mark Haines was highly qualified to assist.

explain why Jerry Jaax chose Captain Mark Haines to accompany him inside.

create a vivid image of the men who are entering the hazardous building.

inform the reader that Jerry Jaax is a man who carefully considers his options.

Type the correct answer in the box.
Determine which barrier to problem solving affects the team members.
The multidisciplinary team evaluates solutions for Inadequate staffing on Saturday evenings in the radiology department. It decides to make
monthly Saturday evening shift mandatory for all employees as this solution worked for a similar problem In another department. This team
displays
a barrier to problem solving.
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Read the passage from "Marriage Is a Private Affair" by Chinua Achebe. In this conversation, Nnaemeka speaks first, and Nene speaks second.

"You have lived in Lagos all your life, and you know very little about people in remote parts of the country.”

"That’s what you always say. But I don’t believe anybody will be so unlike other people that they will be unhappy when their sons are engaged to marry.”

"Yes. They are most unhappy if the engagement is not arranged by them. In our case it’s worse—you are not even an Ibo.”

This was said so seriously and so bluntly that Nene could not find speech immediately. In the cosmopolitan atmosphere of the city it had always seemed to her something of a joke that a person’s tribe could determine whom he married.

At last she said, "You don’t really mean that he will object to your marrying me simply on that account? I had always thought you Ibos were kindly disposed to other people.”

"So we are. But when it comes to marriage, well, it’s not quite so simple. And this,” he added, "is not peculiar to the Ibos. If your father were alive and lived in the heart of Ibibio-land he would be exactly like my father.”

Structure of Abraham letter to James t hall

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which statements are universal themes associated with this topic?select three options.

when the boy saw the effect of war. he no longer viewed life as innocent


the path from innocence to experience cab be long and difficult

one way to define innocence is as lack of worldly experience or sophistication

the loss of innocence is a result of gaining
experience and making mistakes

protecting the innocence of others prevents then from taking risks in their lives
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read the excerpt from choice a tribute to martin luther king jr by alice walker. what is the effect of the rhetorical appeal in this excerpt?

it accuses the reader of not being familiar with kings work

it asks the reader to question why king is not respected as a leader

it explains why people have not heard famous speeches

it questions the knowledge of the people who work in libraries

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Once your answer has been verified, you will be prompt to ___________ your account number and create a new PIN.

write three sentences on why cooperation is needed between teachers and doctors​

What is the best meaning of the word scheme in the sentence below found in the "The Early Days of World War I" article (p. 4)?

"After the pattern was approved, precise plan of the color scheme were drafted and sent to where the actual ship was docked.

The holy water in the story is symbolic. How does
the meaning differ for the priest and Leon? Use
examples from the text as you explain how both
men view the holy water

4. _________all his troubles, Aijaz still helps his friends.​

Ptolemy adjectives describing in positive view and negative view

When evaluating the strength of a thesis statement, what should readers do to determine who or what specifically the author is writing about?

O Watch for key terms that emphasize particular details.
O Confirm that the thesis is not simply a statement of fact.
O Look for evidence the writer uses to support the thesis.
O Read the thesis out loud.

similarities for books and movies

Juan is writing a paper about children who play team sports, and he has several potential research questions. which is his best option?

Read this excerpt from the text.
(5) in spite of the devotion which he had professed for Julia, in spite of his lifelong friendship with Valentine, Proteus no
sooner beheld Silvia than he imagined himself desperately in love with her.
What does this sentence reveal about Proteus's character?
OA
О в.
OC
OD.
It reveals that Proteus is able to control his thoughts and actions.
It reveals that Proteus's love for Julia is unmatched.
It reveals that Proteus's faithfulness is questionable.
It reveals that Proteus values others over himself.

Question 6 of 10
What is the most effective type of research question?
O A. A question that can be answered correctly using common sense
O B. A question that is based on the personal or subjective opinion of
the author
C. A question that can be answered completely through simple
research
D. A question that is challenging and does not have one correct
answer

How is deaf people heavily affected spiritually ? 1 paragraph please

Read the passage about Katherine Johnson. Identify a central idea of the second paragraph and the evidence that supports the idea.
A central idea of the second paragraph is that
supports this idea is
One piece of evidence that
Another piece of evidence that
supports this idea is

in “by the waters of babylon” why does john go to the place of the gods

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Read the excerpts from “Take the Tortillas Out of Your Poetry” and “Speaking Arabic.” My friend had concluded that if he took his language and culture out of his poetry, he stood a better chance of receiving a fellowship. He took out his native language, the poetic patois of our reality, the rich mixture of Spanish, English, pachuco and street talk which we know so well. In other words, he took the tortillas out of his poetry, which is to say he took the soul out of his poetry. At a neighborhood fair in Texas, somewhere between the German Oom-pah Sausage Stand and the Mexican Gorditas booth, I overheard a young man say to his friend, “I wish I had a heritage. Sometimes I feel—so lonely for one.” And the tall American trees were dangling their thick branches right down over his head. Which best states how the structures of the excerpts are similar? Each presents factual evidence to appeal to the reader’s logic. Each documents career credentials to appeal to the reader’s ethics. Each discusses a friend to appeal to the reader’s sense of community. Each relates an anecdote to appeal to the reader’s emotions.

19. Below is the last stanza of a poem, "Dover Beach," written in 1876 by Matthew Arnold.
Ah, love, let us be true
To one another! for the world, which seems
To lie before us like a land of dreams,
So various, so beautiful, so new,
Hath really neither joy, nor love, nor light,
Nor certitude, nor peace, nor help for pain;
And we are here as on a darkling plain
Swept with confused alarms of struggle and flight,
Where ignorant armies clash by night.
Which one of the following statements best characterizes Arnold's view of the world?
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A. The world is made for lovers.


B. The world is not a beautiful place.

C. The world is just a dream.


D. The world is a confusing and hostile place.

You _____ when you have finished writing that report.

can leave
can left
can leaves
can leaving

ANSWER ALL QUESTIONS
1. Written communication is a form of verbal communication
a. true
b. false

It’s A or B

Identify the choice that corrects this run-on sentence.


Sometimes, people say silly things they do not intend to be mean.


Sometimes people say silly things they do not intend to be mean!


Sometimes people say silly things, they do not intend to be mean.


Sometimes people say silly things; they do not intend to be mean

Look at these sentences and underline the word that is an
adjective.






1.Jane bought a big house on the beach.
2.The dress is long.
3.The stormy weather stopped us 4.from going out.
5.Last Saturday, we went to see a scary movie.
6.Some snakes are very dangerous.
7.The people in Louisiana are hoping for a clear day.
8.Let's talk here. This classroom is empty.
9.Some European cities are quite modern.
10.Other European cities are very old.