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(ILL GIVE YOU BRAINILY, it’s not hard ) Write: How might the author, Kate Chopin, use irony affect the characters or the plot of “Desiree's Baby"? Make a prediction using at least one type of irony and explain why you think this using the picture below. [4-5 sentences]

Since Mario began to cook, he__ almost every type of pasta in the world!
A tastes
B tasted
C has tasted

Guys please help me with this essay, it must be more than two hundred words.
the person who answers gets the brainliest answer!!!!!!


Your friend was hurt in a motor accideand was admitted to a hospital. Whrite a letter of comfort and best wishes to him or her.​

Yesterday I cleaned my closet and dusted it thoroughly. I found receipts in a few of my jeans. I folded them neatly and put them in my drawer. I found an old box decorated with ribbons and a pink bow. It still looked pretty and new. In the bottom drawer, there was a bottle of perfume that Mom bought in Sweden. The perfume is old, but it still has a fresh, flowery scent. Next to the perfume there was an old postcard that Dad sent when he visited China.

Imagine you are a news reporter. Write a report about car accident

who do think going to win for president everyone's opinion

Here are some pieces of advice that Randy Pausch gave in his speech “The Last Lecture.” Which suggestions would you be most likely to follow? Check any that apply.

Use feedback.
Show gratitude.
Do not complain.
Work harder.
Be good at something.
Be prepared.

Choose the best word to complete the following sentence. The end to the performance left many surprised. a quick c. rapid b. abrupt d. immediate Please select the best answer from the choices provided O A B​

PLS ASAP NOW ITS FOR TOMORROW.. island of the blue dolphins.. What did Karana do to stay with Ramo?

What question can you help decide where to break the lines in your poem?

Anyone u like to write/say to your favorite teacher ?

Which question would be most effective at encouraging good discussion?

How often did Georgia O'Keeffe work on her paintings?
In which state did Georgia O'Keeffe live during the 1940s?
To which famous photographer was Georgia O'Keeffe married?
Why are so many people drawn to the paintings of Georgia O'Keeffe?

hey so im doing a TDA how do i start it??? i have my prompt and theam i just don't know how to start my TDA PLEASE HELPPPP

Part A

In the story "Never Say Never," what does Carlos do after he loses his voice at the mall?

He refuses to leave his home.
He quits the upcoming talent show.
He mopes about and feels sorry for himself.
He rallies and tries singing again.

Question 2

Part B

Which evidence from the story best supports the answer to Part A?

"His father suggested that he was just in a “slump” and that,with time,he would again belt out popular songs."
"Carlos gradually made his way downstairs as he could scarcely believe his ears."
"They clearly did not comprehend the gravity of the situation. As Carlos continued to lie, fuming,on his bed, the doorbell rang."
"But, in his heart, he felt just the tiniest of possibilities that perhaps his singing days weren’t over after all."

In "The Boy Who Invented TV," how did Philo's farm chores help him envision how a TV might work?

A.
The potato rows inspired him to imagine rows of light.

B.
The chores offered the amount of dedication he needed to be successful.

C.
The chores gave him the resources he needed to build a TV.

D.
Philo and his dad were able to bond over the same interests .

Select the correct answer.
The angry wolf encountered a house made out of straw that he was able to blow down in one deep breath.

Look at the sentence above. Which of the following group of words is an adjectival phrase?
A.
in one deep breath
B.
encountered a house
C.
was able to blow down
D.
made out of straw

What is the MAIN difference between verbal communication and written communication?
Verbal communication has vocalized pauses while written communication doesn’t.
Verbal communication relies on speech while written communication relies on words.
Verbal communication relies on both words and nonverbal cues, or body language.
Verbal communication relies on sight while written communication relies on hearing.

how do you fix the sentence "Ms. Magee has to go to the store after school to buy groceries hopefully, she does not forget any items on her list. "

AHHHH I CAN'T DO THIS
Read the text carefully, then answer the question located beneath:
Time to "Bee" Wary, by Gordon Winters

Africanized honey bees were created in Brazil in 1957. Scientists mixed local bees with African ones to create a bee that would make more honey. They ended up with something much different. The new bees evolved in unexpected ways. They multiplied and migrated north. These Africanized honeybees are now known as killer bees for several scary but legitimate reasons.

Killer bees are far more aggressive than their relatives. They have been known to attack in great numbers, even when there has been no direct threat on their hives. They have swarmed because of loud noises, dark clothing, bright jewelry, and even strong perfume. They will chase a person for more than a quarter of a mile and remain angered for up to 24 hours.

Killer bees are also dangerous because of their sting. While most bees take up to 30 seconds to attack, killer bees sting in just 3 seconds. Their venom is no stronger than a regular bee's, but when one killer bee stings, others follow. With up to 80,000 members in a colony, victims are quickly overwhelmed. So many stings in such a short time can cause allergic reactions. Victims enter a state of shock, lose blood pressure, and in many cases, die.

A final reason why "killer" has been added to their name is the unfortunate number of deaths they have caused. Experts estimate that the Africanized honeybee moves at a rate of about 200 miles each year. As the bees claim new territory, they claim new victims as well. More than 1000 people have been stung to death in South and Central America. There have been rising numbers of attacks in Mexico and a handful in the United States. Once a swarm sets sights on a victim, it is very difficult for the victim to escape. Once attacked, it is very difficult to survive.

Thankfully, there has been no killer bee invasion as some once predicted. Although there is no need for panic, the threat of the killer bee is real and should be taken seriously. It is good practice to call a professional to remove beehives in your area. If you are stung multiple times by any insect, you should always seek medical attention. You may not be expert enough to tell the difference between a killer bee and a less dangerous one, so be smart. It is better to be safe than sorry.

Which details relate to the main fact in the third paragraph? (5 points)

A) Killer bees attack in great numbers. They swarm for many reasons. They chase people and stay angry for hours.
B) Killer bees have very aggressive behavior. Their stings are very dangerous. They have caused many deaths.
C) Killer bees sting in just three seconds. They sting in large numbers. They cause allergic reactions in their victims.
D) Killer bees have been the cause of deaths in South and Central America. They've caused deaths in Mexico and the U.S.

Which phrase from the excerpt contains words with strong connotations that help describe the seriousness of the situation?

What does Fredrick Douglass tell Mr.Thomas about his time at Mr.Covey's?

How are the settings in "To Build a Fire" and "Caline" different?


The setting of "To Build a Fire" is dangerous to the main character, while the setting in "Caline" poses no threat to the main character.


The setting of "To Build a Fire is a frontier town, while "Caline" is set in the rugged wilderness of Canada.


The setting of "To Build a Fire" is inspiring, while the setting of "Caline" is depressing.


The setting of "To Build a Fire" is realistic, while the setting of "Caline" is a fantasy place.

In the crucible Which commandment did John not remember?
A. Thou shall not commit adultery.
B. Thou shall not worship graven images.
C. Thou shall not covet.
D. Thou shall not kill.

complete the words...help me guys!?
1.i_ _ _ _ d _ _ l _
difficult or impossible to believe
2.h_ _ r_ bl_
causing horror or very shocking and upsitting
3._ _ t_ _t_ _n
an aim or purpose; that thing that you plan to
do
4._r_f_
the feeling that you are more important or better than other people
5.a_ _ h _ _ _ _ t
a person who designs and guides a plan or project or building
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Read the following passage:

While I gazed, this fissure rapidly widened— there came a fierce breath of the whirlwind— the entire orb of the satellite burst at once upon my sight— my brain reeled as I saw the mighty walls rushing asunder—

What is the correct meaning of asunder?

A evil
B truth
C divided
D a long narrow opening

Black Lives Matter All Day ever Day.

For each of the different reading purposes, choose whether a memoir or a diary is more likely to provide the information.

describing how it felt to be in hiding

explaining what happened after the war

learning how people in the annex felt about Miep

understanding what people did to save Anne and her family after they'd been arrested.

Fill in the blanks to tell how the
floating classroom works.

Part A

What can be inferred about the speaker's life in the poem "Mother to Son"?


A: Her life has been marked by difficulty.

B: She has struggled to find herself.

C: She has been betrayed by close friends.

D: She is an immigrant to the United States.
Question 2
Part B

Which textual evidence from the poem best supports the answer in Part A?

A: "Don’t you set down on the steps"

B: "So boy, don’t you turn back."

C: "Life for me ain’t been no crystal stair."

D: "For I’se still goin’, honey,"

Which revision is needed to correct the following sentence? My favorite cousin makes delicious blueberry muffins with fresh ripe blueberries form her garden. O A. Add a comma after the word favorite. O B. Add a comma after the word ripe. O C. Add a comma after the word delicious. O D. Add a comma after the word fresh.