What should I change? Also don’t worry about the first and last paragraph.

What Should I Change? Also Dont Worry About The First And Last Paragraph.

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Answer 1

Explanation:

You repeated what the theme is like more than 5 times. It should not be the transition sentence as well as the start of the paragraph. Vary the ways the start and end your paragraphs.

You should have 3 pieces of evidence of your theme. Start with that instead of repeating your theme


Related Questions

What are connotations?
O a word's multiple meanings
O a word's associated ideas or emotions, separate from its literal
meaning
O feelings that an author experiences while writing
O precise definitions of a word

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Answer:

a word's associated ideas or emotions, separate from its literal

meaning

Explanation:

Denotation would be a word's precise definition

Homonyms are words with multiple meanings

When Charlotte says "I was loath to abandon my trust in the men..." she means
1. she was happy to
2. she was unwilling to
3. she was sad to
4. she was ready to​

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Answer:

She was unwilling to

Explanation:

Loath  defintion  :

reluctant; unwilling.

example : "I was loath to leave"

Answer: 2

Explanation:

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Answer:

a

Explanation:

Answer:

Its A. I would know.

Explanation:

Which character in Achebe’s Things Fall Apart best illustrates the excessive zeal of the new Igbo converts to Christianity?

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Answer:

Enoch

Explanation:

In the book 'Things Fall Apart' by Chinua Achebe the character Enoch, is the son of the snake priest.

He is a significant character in the novel because of the fervency with which he embraced Christianity thereby  contributing to the disintegration of the Umuofia clan's traditional beliefs.

He worked assiduously with the missionaries in propagating the new faith.

Question number 2 pls help

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Answer:

I think the answer is C

hope it helps

Explanation:

when he says "she" he is refering to the windmils.

i think the answer is c

I don't know this I need help fast PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
A couplet is ___lines



A quatrain is ____ lines



An octave is _____ lines



A sonnet is _____ lines.

Group of answer choices

2,4,8,14

2,4,8,18

2,3,4,8

14,8,4,2

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2,4,8,14

(20 character minimum)
2,4,8,18 is the answer

Read the sentence.

For making the class laugh constantly, Billy received the goofball award.

What is the gerund phrase in this sentence?


a: the goofball award


b: laugh constantly


c: Billy received


d: making the class laugh constantly

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Making the class laugh constantly

Answer:

making the class laugh constantly

Explanation:

Which statement provides the best counterclaim to Taney’s claim?

Because Dred Scott was the son of a enslaved person, he would always be considered enslaved regardless of what the courts decided.
Because Dred Scott’s parents were born in a different county, Dred Scott could not be considered a citizen of the United States.
Because Dred Scott lived in Wisconsin and Illinois, his freedom should have been granted without having to sue Sanford in court.
Because they were born in the United States, Dred Scott and his family were citizens and had all the rights granted by the Constitution.

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Answer:

Because they were born in the United States, Dred Scott and his family were citizens and had all the rights granted by the Constitution.

Explanation:

Strong man Scott was during those racist times but my answer is right

Answer:

D ;)

Explanation:

Which is a feature of long-form journalism that shorter news articles do not have?

1.facts

2.transitions

3.analysis

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Answer:

3.analysis

Explanation:

Long format journalism usually presents articles with many words and that in addition to exposing the facts of a given situation, they spend considerable time showing an analysis of these facts. Short format journalism also presents facts and transitions, but as it presents smaller articles, it tries more to show what happened, without presenting any analysis.

Answer:

The answer is: 3. analysis

The definition of text includes:
A. printed, visual, and audio media.
B. only words, letters, and fonts.
C. written information only.
D. content found only in books and newspapers.

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Answer:

The answer is C

Parker's Grill got positive reviews after the restaurant reviewer enjoyed a meal there.

Which is the most vivid word to add before "meal" to strengthen the description?
A.
strong
B.
savory
C.
pleasant
D.
good

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C) pleasant , have a good day!

Answer:

C. Pleasant

Explanation:

This makes the most sense

1. If Cora suffers from chronic pneumonia, is it long lasting or short lived? Explain.


2. Would you lie down and take a nap if you were bored and looking for outside stimulus? Why or why not?


3. Nick was talking to the teacher about his homework, but subconsciously was thinking about lunch. Was Nick aware of his thoughts regarding lunch? Why or why not?

No, because being subconscious is in a way that is influenced by the part of the mind of which one is not fully aware.

4. It was excruciatingly awkward when I stood to applaud, not realizing the performance wasn’t over. True or false? It was intensely awkward. Explain.

true

5. If you were subjected to the monotony of watching paint dry, would this be an exciting experience for you? Explain.


6. Would you say that a tsunami is a catastrophic event? Why or why not? Explain.

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Answer:

1. Long-lasting; Chronic means lasting for a long time.

2. No; A stimulus is something that arouses energy. Taking a nap would not do that.

3. No; The subconscious part of the mind is the part that is not fully aware.

4. True; Excruciatingly means extremely awkward or embarrassing.

5. No; Monotony means lack of excitement or interest.

6. Yes; Catastrophic means causing massive damage. A tsunami does that.

Explanation:

The term quiet rage used two words that have opposite meanings. Other examples of such expressions would be open secret, original copy, larger half etc. Think of two more such expressions.

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Answer:

Two more of such expressions are:

- cold flame;

- bright darkness.

Explanation:

Phrases in which the words have opposite, contrasting meanings are examples of oxymorons. Oxymorons are often used as a way to emphasize an idea or concept. Usually, when looking at each word individually, the difference in meaning between them is astonishing. However, in context, they tend to make sense together, conveying the author's ideas in an interesting way. Two more of such expressions are:

- cold flame;

- bright darkness.

help
It’s great that you enjoy swimming so much, but you need to .................................. the time you spend training, if you are feeling tired at school. *
1-cut down on
2-keep up
3-cut out

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Answer:

I think 1-cut down on

It would be 1 to cut down on

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Read this passage from The Jungle Book.

Then the only other creature who is allowed at the Pack Council—Baloo, the sleepy brown bear who teaches the wolf cubs the Law of the Jungle; old Baloo, who can come and go where he pleases because he eats only nuts and roots and honey—rose up on his hind quarters and grunted.

"The man's cub—the man's cub?" he said. "I speak for the man's cub. There is no harm in a man's cub. I have no gift of words, but I speak the truth. Let him run with the Pack, and be entered with the others. I myself will teach him.”



Baloo is affected by the Law of the Jungle in this passage because

A.) he is sleepy and eats only nuts, roots, and honey
B.) he is free to come and go where he pleases
C.) he likes to stand up and speak to large audiences.
D.) he speaks up for Mowgli and becomes Mowgli’s teacher

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D

Since Baloo ends up breaking the law to become Mowgli's teacher he is effected by it

Answer:

D.He speaks up for Mowgli and becomes Mowgli´s teacher

Explanation:

Every other answer doesn´t seem like the right one expect this one.

Betty Friedan was an activist and leader of social change, and many women's rights proponents think of her as a hero. In no less than 150 words, describe why they might look up to her.

doesn't have to be just can't be one sentence

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Answer: Journalist, activist, and co-founder of the National Organization for Women, Betty Friedan was one of the early leaders of the women’s rights movement of the 1960s and 1970s. Her 1963 best-selling book, The Feminine Mystique, gave voice to millions of American women’s frustrations with their limited gender roles and helped spark widespread public activism for gender equality.

Bettye Naomi Goldstein was born on February 4, 1921 in Peoria, Illinois, the oldest of three children of Harry Goldstein, a Russian immigrant and jeweler, and Miriam Horowitz Goldstein, a Hungarian immigrant who worked as a journalist until Bettye was born.  

A pre-fix is found in what location of a word?

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Explanation:

A prefix is an affix which is placed before the stem of a word. Adding it to the beginning of one word changes it into another word. For example, when the prefix un- is added to the word happy, it creates the word unhappy.

at the beginning

Answer:

At the beginning of the word.

Explanation:

For example: impossible

The pre-fix is im

The base word is possible

Im means not, therefore impossible means not possible

Which statement best explains how the experience of watching Kennedy speak is different from reading his words?

A Kennedy’s emphasis on certain words conveys his need to assert his authority.

B Kennedy’s pauses reveal his uncertainty about the strength of his argument.

C Kennedy’s gestures add emphasis and passion to his argument.

D Kennedy’s posture indicates his discomfort when speaking in public.

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Answer:

A

Explanation:

its difficult to read somebodys attitude but its easy to hear it

Answer:

C. Kennedy’s gestures add emphasis and passion to his argument.

Explanation:

Pls what is an Acrostic poem for Dance

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Answer:

I think this is an acrostic poem

comment if it needs to be longer or something

Explanation:

Driving

Away all the

Negative feelings from this

Cold,

Eery winter day

please give me a poem

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Answer:

A permanent occasion

Knotted into the clouds: pink, then blue,

Like a baby holding its breath, or colorless

As the gush and pop of conversations

Under water. You feel handed from clasp to clasp,

A concert carried off by the applause.

Other times half of you...

Explanation:

Read the excerpt from Justice Curtis’s dissenting opinion, then answer the question that follows.

Slavery, being contrary to natural right, is created only by municipal law. This is not only plain in itself, and agreed by all writers on the subject, but is inferable from the Constitution, and has been explicitly declared by this court. The Constitution refers to slaves as “persons held to service in one State, under the laws thereof.” . . . .

. . . It was certainly understood by the Convention which framed the Constitution, and has been so understood ever since, that, under the power to regulate commerce, Congress could prohibit the importation of slaves; and the exercise of the power was restrained till 1808. A citizen of the United States owns slaves in Cuba, and brings them to the United States, where they are set free by the legislation of Congress. Does this legislation deprive him of his property without due process of law? If so, what becomes of the laws prohibiting the slave trade? If not, how can a similar regulation respecting a Territory violate the fifth amendment of the Constitution? . . . .

For these reasons, I am of opinion that so much of the several acts of Congress as prohibited slavery and involuntary servitude within that part of the Territory of Wisconsin . . . were constitutional and valid laws.

–Dissenting opinion on Dred Scott v. Sandford,
Justice Benjamin Curtis

Which evidence best supports Curtis’s opinion that Dred Scott should be free because he lived in a free territory? Check all that apply.

“The Constitution refers to slaves as ‘persons held to service in one State’”
“The Convention which framed the Constitution . . . has . . . the power to regulate commerce.”
“A citizen of the United States owns slaves in Cuba.”
“Does this legislation deprive him of his property without due process of law?”
“Acts of Congress as prohibited slavery and involuntary servitude within that part of the Territory of Wisconsin . . . were constitutional and valid laws.”

HINT: THERE ARE ONLY 2 CORRECT ANSWERS

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Answer:

“The Constitution refers to slaves as ‘persons held to service in one State’”

“Acts of Congress as prohibited slavery and involuntary servitude within that part of the Territory of Wisconsin . . . were constitutional and valid laws.”

Explanation:

Read the passage bro

I'm right

Answer:

A- “The Constitution refers to slaves as ‘persons held to service in one State’”

E- “Acts of Congress as prohibited slavery and involuntary servitude within that part of the Territory of Wisconsin . . . were constitutional and valid laws.”

Which elements are most associated with the genre of science fiction?

1) magic and the supernatural

2) space and the future

3) events that could never happen

4) realistic plots and settings​

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Answer:

I would go with 1.

Explanation:

That's just my opinion.

Answer:

2. Space and the Future

Explanation:

hey, so i’m currently doin an informative essay on explaining how climate change impacts the world after reading text on australian fires if anyone would like to help me.. pls do so !

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Answer:

Have you considered highlighting the already arid climate?

Explanation:

As someone who's seen australia, I can confidently say the middle feels like it's constantly on fire. Maybe highlight that this creates highly flammable brush?

literary devices quotes in fahrenheit 451 that show the central idea

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Answer:

Do you still need help?????

3. What archetypes does Irving use in "The Devil and Tom Walker"? Why do you think he
chose to use them?

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Answer:

The archetype for the "The Devil and Tom Walker" would be that of Faust. Washington's story describes the archetypal "deal with the devil" that ends in tragedy.  

It is usually the case that the benefits associated with a Faustian bargain are dwarfed by what is required in return. In the story, Tom Walker makes a deal with Old Scratch: in return for access to the pirate's treasure, he will use his newfound wealth in the Devil's service.  

For his part, Old Scratch demands that Tom engage in what is known as "black traffic" or the slave trade. Tom refuses vehemently but agrees to the Devil's next suggestion: that he works as a money-lender. In due time, Tom becomes extremely wealthy. He revels in his new wealth and position in society. However, he begins to have second thoughts about his bargain with Old Scratch.  

In his old age, Tom begins to feel apprehensive about the next life. So, he begins attending church regularly, and he becomes a dogmatic believer in God. As we learn, Tom's panicked rituals of contrition do little to secure his salvation. The Devil comes for him, sealing the Faustian bargain. So, the archetype for "The Devil and Tom Walker" is the story of Faust, where a "deal with the devil" ends in tragedy.


Critical Reading
The following question is based on your reading of Macbeth, Act III.
Act III of The Tragedy of Macbeth serves mainly to
a. introduce the play's climax.
C. introduce important new characters.
b. expose Macbeth's mounting troubles. d. resolve the play's central conflicts.

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Answer:

a

Explanation:

The Act III of the Tragedy of Macbeth serves the main purpose of introduction to the play's climax.

What is a climax?

A climax is the one which concludes the story, where the audience finally makes a decision regarding the quality of the play, and in such a way that the story of the play has essentially come to an end.

The Act I of Macbeth shows the acts done by Lady Macbeth to kill Duncan, and the play finally reaches its climax towards the beginning of the Act III of the play.

Hence, option A holds true regarding the climax of the 'Tragedy of Macbeth.'

Learn more about a climax here:

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is this a thesis statement?

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Answer: Yes, that is a thesis statement.

Explanation:

Answer:

NO

Explanation:

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Puritans fled their homeland to seek religious freedom. Once in the Massachusetts Bay Colony, how did they treat others who wanted to practice Christianity in a different way?

a.) People with other religious beliefs were not tolerated in the Massachusetts Bay Colony; they were forced to leave.

b.) People with other religious beliefs were welcomed by colony leaders but shunned by everyone else.

c.) People with other religious beliefs were encouraged to combine their practices with Puritan faith customs.

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B) people with other religious beliefs were welcomed by colony leaders but shunned by everyone else.

Answer:

People with other religious beliefs were not tolerated in the Massachusetts Bay Colony; they were forced to leave.

Explanation:

what does callowness mean

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Answer:

Callowness definition . . .

Noun. 1. Callowness - lacking and evidencing lack of experience of life. jejuneness, juvenility. immatureness, immaturity - not having reached maturity.

Explanation:

Basically that they are immature.

I need 4 examples of signposts from chapters 1-3 in Of mice and men. I NEED IT FAST!!

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Answer

In chapter one, george mentions how Lennie can never remember anything

In chapter one, George tells Lennie to go to the river if anything went wrong

In chapter two, Candy gossips with George about Curley's wife

In chapter two, we find out what happened to Lennie and George in Weed

Explanation:

Answer: below I really hope it works

Explanation:

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