What revision, if any, is needed to make this thesis statement more effective?


In the novel Lord of the Flies, William Golding uses Ralph, with his leadership, initial optimism, and naivete, as a symbol for order and civilization.


a) It needs to address meaning, or the "so what?"

b) It needs to be arguable or defensible.

c) It should provide evidence for the position.

d) It should provide the last names of characters.

e) No revision is needed; the thesis is effective.

In order for the thesis statement to be more effective, it must be arguable or defensible.

A strong thesis statement provides direction to the essay or paper and creates a focus or limits the scope of the subject. It also provides the readers with information about what the body of the thesis is all about.

Below are qualities of a good/effective thesis statement:

The correct answer, therefore, is B.

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STORY: The Elevator by William Sleator

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Which element is a best practice for giving a presentation?
A.
You need not speak; your slideshow can do all the talking.
B.
Your slideshow is the star of your presentation; you should speak about only what’s in the slideshow.
C.
Your speech is the star of your presentation; design your slideshow to support your speech.
D.
You are the star of the presentation; how you’re dressed for the occasion will have the most impact on its success

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Which equipment is essential to create a podcast?
A. a computer, a microphone, headphones, and recording software
B. a computer, a portable audio recorder, and video production software
C. a computer with premium audio recording software
D. a full sound recording studio and a set of headphones

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Read the following paragraph: "People with disabilities are worried about the push to ban plastic straws. Non-plastic straws pose a number of problems for disabled users. Metal ones are too rigid for people who have trouble moving their head or hands, Metal straws can also damage the teeth of anyone with limited control of their jaws. Paper straws fall apart, especially in hot beverages, which makes them impractical for people who have to drink slowly." Which choice below is the topic sentence? Metal ones are too rigid for people who have trouble moving their head or hands. Metal straws can also damage the teeth of anyone with limited control of their jaws. Paper straws fall apart, especially in hot beverages, which makes them impractical for people who have to drink slowly. Non-plastic straws pose a number of problems for disabled users.​

What is a central theme of “Racing to Race?”


Training takes time and dedication.

A close friend is good medicine.

Good things always come to those who wait.

Running a race is not always about winning.
Question 2
Part B

Which statement best shows how the theme identified in Part A is developed in the story?


Carlo pictures himself winning a big race on the school track team and when he realizes that he may not be able to run, he is very discouraged and disappointed.

Carlo realizes that he may not be able to compete on the school track team because his injury is not fully healed but discovers that he can still run for fun with his friend.

Meiya reminds Carlo that he has just finished rehab, and Carlo acknowledges that he will once again have to build up his strength and endurance.

Meiya knows that she is faster than Carlo, so she does her best to encourage him and also lets him win a race between them to boost his spirits.

What are the actions of Paul, Kat, and Kropp during the gas attack? Provide evidence to
support your thinking.

Define anti-hero in your own words using an example from a book, TV show, or movie for support.

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She's only filled with an old blind wish.
It isn't even hers but came to her
in the rain
or the soft wind,
which is a gate through which her life keeps
walking.

She can't see
herself apart from the rest of the world
or the world from what she must do
every spring.
Crawling up the high hill,
luminous under the sand that has packed
against her skin.
she doesn't dream
she knows
she is a part of the pond she lives in,
the tall trees are her children,
the birds that swim above her
are tied to her by an unbreakable string.

—“The Turtle,”
Mary Oliver

In your poem, you should use visual elements to separate ideas. Which three visual elements does this excerpt of “The Turtle” include? Check all that apply.

capital letters to start each sentence
a break between stanzas
lines that are all the same length
punctuation such as periods and commas
lines that each contain a complete sentence

Read this sentence from paragraph 5 “Thus, proponents of doing away with cursive in schools think that the time might be more wisely spent teaching keyboarding." Using the meaning of the prefix "pro-,” what does the word proponents mean in the sentence? 2 groups supporters competitors individuals​

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5. If a poems has a regular rhythm throughout the poem, it has: irony meter tone imagery

what does alvin the chipmunk want for christmas in the chipmunk song

Consider the meaning of the word "dominate” and that the Latin prefix pre-can
mean "in front of." Use that information and the context clues provided in the
passage to determine the meaning of predominating. Write your definition of
predominating here and tell how you determined its meaning.

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read the excerpt from harrison bergeron. a police photograph of harrison bergeron was flashed on the screen—upside down, then sideways, upside down again, then right side up. this excerpt is an example of satire because it humorously:

Do you think people differ much according to the part of the country they live in? Why?

The time required a music degree is 3-4 years for a Bachelor of Music degree, 1-2 years for a Master of Music degree, and 3-5 years for a Doctor of Musical Arts or Doctor of Music Degree. (complete)

what a good hook sentence for an MLK essay?

Mark the letter A, B, C and D to indicate the word whose underlined part differs from the other three in pronunciation in each of the following questions.
Question 1: A. giant B. target C. figure D. garbage
Question 2: A. itchy B. stomach C. charity D. match
Question 3: A. shop B. bone C. coffee D. hot
Question 4: A. looked B. watched C. collected D. laughed

Why does Douglass use allusions to the Constitution in his speech?
A. They create a balance between Douglass's vehement tone and his
lack of logic.
B. They show that slavery cannot be defended in light of the highest
laws of the country.
C. They help Douglass make the case for abolishing Independence
Day
D. They show that Douglass realizes he won't be able to persuade his
audience.

What are two components of an effective summary of a work?

In paragraph 1 of "Growing Up: Key Moments," why does the author use the phrase
"crossing days off the calendar?"

A) To suggest that everyone needs a calendar
B) To describe how becoming a teenager happens overnight
C) To indicate that growing up isn't just about the passage of time
D) To imply that going to school is important

is there a +tion version of "release", if so what is it
ex:
transport + a + tion

3.She displayed some of her paintings at the local __________
A. commune B. post office C. demonstration D. exhibition.
14. I’d like to introduce you to Mrs. Thuy, __________ is the teacher of this special class.
A. that B. which C. who D. whom
15. My father didn’t __________coffee for breakfast.
A. used to have B. use to have C. use to having D. use be having
16. How often__________your car serviced since you bought it?
A. do you get B. did you get C. had you gotten D. have you gotten
17. The program must be new. I__________it before.
A. have never been seen B. have ever seen
C. have never seen D. have seen
18. 'We __________ a party on Sunday, 12th November. Can you come?' `Yes, I'd love to.'
A. are having B. are going to have C. will have D. having
19. 'Good luck. When will you be here?' `Tomorrow. My plane __________ at 7:00, so I__________ you about 8:00.'
A. will land/ see B. lands/ will see
C. is landing/ am going to see D. land/to see
20. Look at those cars! They__________!
A. will crash B. are crashing C. will be crashed D. are going to crash

There is a park near my house with a brand-new baseball field.

What is the function of the word near in the sentence?
adverb

interjection

conjunction

preposition

Is this a metaphor?

"I held onto the railing as if my life depended on it."​

(g) Will he pass the exam!
6. Change the following speech into indirect speech.
(a) He said to me, "Write your name on this paper."
(b) He said to me,"Wait for me here."
(c) He said to them "Don't go out alone."
(d) He said to me,"Type this letter immediately."
(6) Peter said, "Don't do it again."
(The students said, "We may be a little late."
(g). He said, "You must answer this question."
(h) He said, "I can't stay out very late."
() She said to me, "You ought to
more careful."
(k) I said to them, "Don't write on your desks."