Revise the passage below so that it maintains a formal style and tone throughout.
Passage
Most fine arts classes, including visual art, music composition, dance, theater, and
creative writing, feature a peer-review component in which students provide feedback on
their classmates' work. Some art teachers maintain that peer review is a valuable
teaching tool that not only helps student artists reimagine their work but also pushes
student critics to develop their taste and technical vocabulary. The thing that's wrong
with this is that sometimes people give really lame feedback and don't get how to be
nice. When that happens, feelings can be hurt, and the peer-review process can become
unproductive.

Answer:

the first one

Explanation:

it uses a actual problem in the real world

Answer:

first one cuz they explain why it's good

Answer:

This story is significant for the author because he can see the family uniting in taking his grandmother, lined up and tidy, to the nursing home, being supported by those she supported, her children.

Explanation:

"Growing Up Asian in America" is reinforcing the role of the family in establishing self-recognition in a culture and in a people. This shows how the family has an important weight in each person's life, especially at the moment, when each individual is more fragile. This family concept is touching for the author when he sees the whole family helping to take his grandmother to a nursing home. The grandmother supported the children when they needed it and now it is her turn to receive their support.

Answer:

This story is significant to the author because during it she saw how her mother and relatives worked in unison to help and provide support for her grandmother who lived in her own home, but who also could no longer live alone. That is, they made sure she felt cared for and not forgotten, which must have made this transition in her life much easier to cope with. The text implies the author's grandmother perhaps accepted this change rather quickly and did not really resist as many other elderly people do. These people (from what I have heard) feel like they lose control over their lives and are abandoned by their children at these nursing homes, where they think that they only leave when they die. It is really quite sad when you think about it. However, this family made sure this women didn’t feel this way, and the author took note of it. Especially her mother's actions during this time, which truly conveyed her values and further helped to develop the the author’s description of her identity as a Japanese American women.

Explanation:

This is what I answered in my exam, I derived my answer from what I learned through out the essay on how the author ( Noda) viewed her mother and how this came to be in the section that was under "I am a Japanese American women". Her mother's actions in response to what was happening to Noda's grandmother really impacted Noda and on her perspective of Japanese women. So, well, she included this story in her essay, which also helped support one of her purposes ( her reason for writing), that is to reach acceptance with her own identity as a Japanese American woman. This is really important because at first Noda saw her mother as "a figure in whom I thought I saw all that I feared most in my self", which was fitting into the stereotype of Japanese people being only silent and passive.

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1. The Mom is forgetful sometimes (locked key in car see answer to number 3) and wishes for her daughter (Celia) to given her more of a heads up sometimes when it comes to preparing for future occasions.

2. The setting take place outside of a grocery store since they are buying ingredients for a sandwhich and says grocery bag, and additionally it says parking lot. This doesn't always mean that it would be a grocery store but in this case it is.

3. The mom left the keys in the car. The shining object that Celia sees when she looks inside the window are the keys.

Answer:

Inappropriate

Explanation:

Answer:

a per pair  the phone

Explanation:

only because it makes sense

Answer:

we

Explanation:

Answer:

He has a basket full of herbs.

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Answer:

Hi there~

The answer would be:

A full basket of herbs.

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Answer:d

Explanation:becsause i dont knoe

Answer:

C

Explanation:

Took the test. :)

The statement which is a characteristic of all moral dilemmas in fiction is they do not have easy solutions to a problem. The correct option is c.

Fiction is any creative work, chiefly any narrative work, portraying individuals, events, or places that are imaginary, or in ways that are imaginary.

Fictional portrayals are thus inconsistent with history, fact, or plausibility. In a traditional narrow sense, "fiction" refers to written narratives in prose – often referring specifically to novels, novellas, and short stories. More broadly, however, fiction encompasses imaginary narratives expressed in any medium, including not just writings but also live theatrical performances, films, television programs, radio dramas, comics, role-playing games, and video games.

Typically, the fictionality of a work is publicly marketed and so the audience expects the work to deviate in some ways from the real world rather than presenting, for instance, only factually accurate portrayals or characters who are actual people.

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Answer:

A

Explanation:

i took the test

Answer:

Uh, well I could say I have an  issue with myself among other things?

Answer:

Every morning. I get out of bed. ;-;

Ok sorry-

I think a struggle we all face is being a good person when no one is looking. I know for myself I am motivated by what other people will think of me and my actions so when I'm doing something purely out of the goodness of my heart it's a struggle. Especially when it's something that's difficult or just something I don't really want to do.

Explanation:

Answer: A

Explanation:

There you go, you got it ASAP NO ROCKY.

Answer:

yes you are correct

Explanation:

Answer:

yes you got it

Explanation:

i think not completely sure

Answer:

yeah. that it.

Explanation:

because, yeah

Answer:

the first one is adverb phase but idrk abt the second verb phrase

Explanation:

Answer:

It's very dream-like. You have no self-control whatsoever. Some may describe it as a "state of bliss" but in reality, its just false happiness.

Answer:

the correct answer is A: professional

Answer:

A and B

Explanation:

Pre mean before

Answer: C

Explanation:

Answer:

C. Listen well and carefully to our show.

Explanation:

I think this is the line you wanted to restate -The which if you with patient ears attend,- But I can confirm this is the correct answer because I just did the assignment.

Answer:

1. knew

2. thought

3. small

4. sweet

5. I have a stick and, a umbrella

6. The sun rises in the East, but sets in the West

Explanation:

Americans lose interest in Romanticism and Transcendentalism because people stopped learning about them.

Romanticism refers to the movement that originated in the late 18th century which emphasized subjectivity, primacy, and inspiration from individuals.

Transcendentalism focused on the adherence to an idealistic system of thought. Romanticism and Transcendentalism were vital as individuals were able to get inspiration from nature. Transcendentalism was known to be a reaction against the overpowering dogma and religious traditions.

In the end, people lost interest and then stopped learning about them.

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Answer:

One synonym for it would be large

Answer:

You could say plentiful, ample, or copious.

Explanation:

Answer:

Hope you don't mind me if you use the article which I created , if your teacher questions, just tell your teacher it's based on someone that you imagined.

The article says about my biography, I'm a kind of person which might seem cold and angry, but I'm actually compassionate and caring, always there for others in need of help. I used to be one of the best Hollywood stars, famous for being in movies and western drama series on Netflix. Known for playing Rebecca in The Chronicles of Rebecca Daniels, Vicky Donovan in The Vampire Diaries. I was raised in a poor family in Toronto, Canada. My parents didn't have enough money to support the family, so at the age of 9, I decided to start to travel around to find commercials to play in after I found out that had a passion for acting, and able to earn some money for my family. At the age of 10, I requested different acting agencies to be able to get in, but they all rejected me as they felt like I was too young, but I did not give up. I decided to invest all my time, including my revision time in acting. Finally, at the age of 12, I got an invitation from an acting agency.

Answer:

complex

Explanation:

A simple sentence consists of only one clause. A compound sentence consists of two or more independent clauses. A complex sentence has at least one independent clause plus at least one dependent clause. A set of words with no independent clause may be an incomplete sentence, also called a sentence fragment.

Answer:

d

Explanation:

Answer:

The answer is D. (A series of events that build the plot toward the climax of the story)

tez ong its right

Explanation:

Answer:

D) it tries to persuade by using reasoning that is not sound or logical

Explanation:

Fallacy can be defined as a mistaken or false belief that are based on illogical arguments or reasoning.

However, a lot of people might actually think it to be true but it isn't. There are various types of fallacy and these include; black or white, non sequitur, ad hominem, bandwagon, appeal to authority, straw man, oversimplification/hasty generalization.

Validity refer to the soundness of conclusions that can be drawn from an argument. It is a term used to refer to how precise and accurate an information or reasoning describes, estimate, and establishes the truth.

Hence, a fallacious reasoning ruin the validity of an argument because it tries to persuade by using reasoning that is not sound or logical.

For example;

I. For a great night's sleep, buy a mattress from Mattress Warehouse. Our unique brand of mattress is the only mattress that Donald King will buy for his home.

II. I had dysentery last night after eating meat pie, pizzas are the best and tastiest.

Answer:

I think that the answer is A. Correct me if I'm wrong.

Explanation:

Answer:

FAXXXXX

Explanation:

Explanation:

Nature has provided man with a vast reserve of resources. Man has used these resources to build a world of comfort and luxury. However, we need to ask ourselves "What is the cost of this comfort?" Mother nature is surely resourceful, but it is also very powerful. This excessive use of nature may cost man much more than his comfort and luxury. One of the biggest concerns to address is deforestation, which may have a domino effect once it unravels global warming. Deforestation causes soil erosion and unabsorption of carbon dioxide which is a ticking time bomb to global warming. Man's exploitation of nature has led to cause many environmental imbalances. Tsunami is the perfect and the best example of an environmental imbalance caused. These treats of the environment are being ignored by mankind in the pursuit of commerce, medicine, agriculture, and infrastructure. However, the onset of 'global warming' has begun.