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02.10 Kick it Up a Notch

You will revise one body paragraph from your compare and contrast article. You will submit the original paragraph, the revised paragraph, and a short paragraph describing how your revisions improved your writing.

View the grading rubric as you complete your assignment. This is your guide to a super submission.

Review your informational article. Choose one body paragraph to revise and copy this paragraph into a new document.
Review your paragraph and make sure you have a topic sentence and supporting ideas for this topic.
Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.
Review your paragraph for correct English language conventions. Correct any errors.
Write one short paragraph describing how your revisions improved your writing.
You will submit:

The original draft of your body paragraph
The revised draft of the same paragraph
A short paragraph describing how your revisions improved your writing

PARAGRAPH:
Minutes That Matter and Defeating Dragons are looking for the same: help people. Both groups (projects) help people all the time and they don't ask for money because they love to help people, and both sacrifice their time to help people, because they know that all lives are worthy.

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Answer 1

Answer:

I DId this before it was a week ago here copy and paste it  will help you

Explanation:

Do canteens make a positive difference in the lives of others? In the article Minute That Matter by Kristina Waltz, two teenagers Brittany & her brother Robbie wanted to help military soldiers with their phone bills so they started an organization called Cell Phones for Soldiers.   In another article, Food that Fuels by Chad Bailey, Cassandra & other teenagers formed another organization called Food that Fuels where they save food grease & reuse it and refine it into biodiesel. These two organizations helped many people.

In the organization Cell Phone for Soldiers, Kristina & Robbie first began by raising money to help a  soldier pay his cell phone bill. Brittany decided to send donated cell phones to the soldiers.  They collected old phones and turned them in to be recycled & then used that money to send prepaid phone cards to troops.  “Over 180 million talk time has been given to soldiers” due to this organization.

In the organization Food That Fuels Cassandra & other teenagers used old cooking to create biodiesel. They went to the school board and spoke to them about using this fuel for the school busses. “It doesn’t matter how big or small you are, anyone can make a difference.  Cassandra & other teenagers are making a positive difference.

Both these organizations help others by using recycled products.  Both organizations have earned awards and even Cassandra & the other teenagers have gone to the White house. Although they both used recycled products, they used different products.  The Cell Phone for Soldiers used recycled phones to help pay for phone minute cards for soldiers.   The Food That Fuels used old cooking oil to refine and make biodiesel fuel. These two organizations may be different and are also similar in being teenagers and helping others.  

Teenagers can make a positive difference in the lives of others. Food That Fuels helps their environment by using old cooking oil to create biodiesel.   Cell Phone for Soldiers helps soldiers by collecting old cell phones to recycle and earn prepaid cell phones for soldiers. Teenagers help people.

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Related Questions

which sentence best describes voice rather than style?

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b or d
pretty sure D

Answer:

make sure you give more context so it is easier to answer, but I think it might be a

Explanation:

if it is not correct then I apologize

Write a short definition for parallelism.

Write a short definition for synonymous.

Write a short definition for synthetic.

Write a short definition for antithetical.

Write a short definition for emblematic.

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Parallelism - between the two species of a plant or an animals is one difference of others

Synonymous - having someone of a synonymous like reference to runners

Synthetic - relating to or a affect the body to systemic disease

Antithetical - the nature or opposed. Or contrasted like the opposite

Answer:

emblematic: of, relating to, or constituting an emblem : symbolic, representative.

Explanation:

help plz im timed!!!

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the answer is plot lol

Answer: C. Character

Explanation:

I'm pretty sure that exposition is basically the background of a character.

Correct me if I am incorrect.

Please help me solve this

Part one : What is 9(2+3^4) ?

Part two : Turn this expression into a word problem

12 points for December 12th ! :>

Happy holidays everyone !

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Answer: the answer is 747

Explanation: im sorry but i'm not sure how to turn this into a word problem. it's difficult. hope this helped

747.
three to the fourth power plus two. that answer times 9.

Why does Killer Kane wake Max before daybreak ?

( Book : Freak The Mighty - Chapter : 17 )

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Answer:

TO STEAL

Explanation:

He wakes Max before daybreak because he says that if it is true that he killed this boys mother god ,strike me dead and nothing happend .

Please help me with this question ! :<

Happy holidays ! [ New years is soon :3 ]

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Debut is the answer because the definition of debut means to introduce first or appear first.

Identify the words with a similar denotation as terrified.

options:

frightened


hesitant


anxious


scared

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Answer:

Two words are similar if not exactly like the word "terrified".

These words are listed below:

Scared.

Frightened.

Explanation:

Answer:

Scared and Frightened

Explanation:

Briefly explain, using paraphrased text support and a quote, why you believe Nye chose prose to convey her ideas in the story, "Allied with Green."

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Answer:

A narrator used a variety of prose to convey her ideas in the story, "Allied with Green."

*The narrator wrote with a sense of urgency and persuasion by incorporating various metaphors throughout the piece.

"The earth is just as cold as me, but somehow it doesn't put up a fight." This phrase captures the intensity of her mood when she feels hopeless. The author uses rhetoric to draw sympathy from readers and make them feel like they are inside her mind.

Rewrite this into a 250-word paragraph.

I learned how to develop a compelling lead when writing informational essays. It's something I struggle with the most. By writing better paragraphs and avoiding long, rambling sentences, I improved my writing. In my future writing, I plan to use more elaboration and have a more teaching tone. Non-fiction is critical since it provides a glimpse of reality.

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When writing my explanative essay, I found a way to increase  compelling leads. That's what I'm having the most trouble with. By writing paragraphs greater and deriving long, verbose sentences, I improved my writing. In the   Fate Letter, I will apply additional details and use additional coaching tones.  Non-fiction is important because they give insight into reality.

Paul is writing a poem to submit to a national writing contest.

Which line should he include to fulfill the simile requirement?

A.
The flower wilted like a tired child.
B.
The fragile flower wilted in the wind.
C.
The flower stood tall and did not fall.
D.
The delicate flower whispered softly.
You will be awared at least 20 points

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Answer: A

Explanation: This option uses the word "like" this word is an indicator of simile.

Answer: The answer is A.

Explanation:

A.

The flower wilted like a tired child.

Hope I helped :)

Based on what you have read of “A Brother’s Quest,” how do you expect Alexander to respond to the events of the play?

A.
Alexander will come to accept Niall's guilt and confront him as the true thief.
B.
Alexander will give in to fear and frame Niall to avoid trouble with Lord Vanderpool.
C.
Alexander will continue to feel doubtful and decide to let events take their course.
D.
Alexander will maintain his loyalty, and search out and investigate another suspect.

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Answer:

I believe its C but let me know if i'm wrong

Explanation:

I am pretty sure tu answer is C

A cliche can be describe as:

a new idea
a form of fiction
a meaningful phrase
a tired, overused expression

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Answer: here

Explanation:

A tired, overused expression

Overused expression. Describes an unimaginative idea or action

Can some pretend to be a news reporter for football this is 70 points.

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Answer:

ok!

Explanation:

Im just going to use the last name morgan (making up names)

Hello welcome to News today Sports!

MY name is (name)

If you watched last game, you saw the greatest throw in history by morgan to fin by 90 yards! What a throw! Lets see the video . (shows video) AS you see morgan used arm to just chick that football across the yard and scored the dolphins the winning point. Fin used the last of his energy to run and made the point!  No one has EVer made a throw as incredible as that! As you see here *freezes video* you see don trying to catch the ball in mid air Almost making it but meets the ground instead.

Thats news today by (name) and have a great night

Answer: I got you

Explanation: Hello this is Sportz X, I’m (name) we are here in football season right now the score is 10 to 16 as we take the ball and run down the field while avoiding every tackle and we score as we make a touch down

Which word is a synonym of glib? HELPPPPPP MEEEEEE PLZZZZZZZ!!!!

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Answer:

slick

pat

neat

plausible

silky

smooth-talking

fast-talking

smooth

urbane

smooth-tongued

silver-tongued

smooth-spoken

fluent

voluble

loquacious

disingenuous

insincere

facile

shallow

superficial

simplistic

oversimplified

easy

ready

flippant

flip

sweet-talking

which word most contributes to the tone of this sentence?

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I think it is A but tell me if I am wrong good luck

Which word is a synonym of covert? HELP ME PLZ!!!

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Answer:

THE SYNONYM FOR COVER IT stealth

Explanation:

Answer: Your answer would be stealth

Explanation:

Why was shipbuilding important to the Romans' international trade?



1. The fastest way to move goods between Italy and Asia or Africa was by ship.


2. Italy was covered with forests, which provided the lumber needed to build ships.


3. Romans could build ships faster and better than their neighbors.


4. A major part of Rome's economy was the selling of ships to foreign merchants.

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The first one. The fastest way to move goods between Italy and Asia or Africa was by ship.
The first one is the answer

Which definition of the word access is being used in the sentence?

Julie needs the password to access the locked files.



options:

1. noun. The ability, right, or permission to use, enter, or approach something.


2. noun. A way or method of approach.


3. verb. To be able to reach, enter, use, or approach.

DONT PUT A LINK

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Answer:

3, verb

Explanation:

She needs the password to "be able to reach" the files.

Answer:

It is 3. verb.

i just did the assignment

Explanation:

The word pliable means easily bent, flexible, or influenced. What does the word pliability mean?


A. Having the quality of being easily bent or flexible
B. Not flexible and difficult to bend or influence
C. Someone who is exceptionally pliable and flexible
D. The opposite of being easily bent or flexible

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Answer:

A

Explanation:

the quality of being easily bent; flexibility.

Answer : A

Explanation : if the word pliable means easily bent, and flexible then when the word gets added with " ty " it's like saying it with certainty

Example : this ruler has good pliability

( sorry for my bad english )

From the book the outsiders
how does Ponyboy compare to Ralph in their experiences of moving on? What results for the two characters after the loss of their friends?

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Answer:

She shows him around town and helps him unite with her freinds

Explanation:

Please help me with this question ! :<

Happy holidays ! [ New years is soon :3 ]

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Answer:

resilient

Explanation:

The sentence along the lines of "birds near Chernobyl reported that some species were surprisingly resilient". The word resilient means the ability to recover quickly from adversity; toughness.

The answer is resilient hope IT can Help

Which sentences must be revised to correct vague pronouns? Choose three answers.

They say strange things happen during a full moon.
Phil visited Uncle James shortly after his vacation.
I talked to my teacher and she agreed to postpone the exam.
After her accident, Julie helped Lian fix her broken-down bike.
We took Grandma to the museum to celebrate her recovery.
Before Tara’s recital, Jemma wished her good luck.

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Answer:

They say strange things happen during a full moon.

Phil visited Uncle James shortly after his vacation.

After her accident, Julie helped Lian fix her broken down bike.

Explanation:

In the first, "They" doesn't explain who says things happen during the full moon.

In the second, "His" does not explain who went on vacation.

In the third, "Her" doesn't fully explain who's bike had broken down.

Th sentences which must be revised are A.They say strange things happen during a full moon.  B. Phil visited Uncle James shortly after his vacation. and D. After her accident, Julie helped Lian fix her broken down bike.

What is a pronoun?

This is a word that can replace a noun in a snetence an the noun which is replaced   by a pronoun is known as antecedent.

The replaced words should be:

They doesn't explain who says things happen during the full moon.His does not explain who went on vacation.Her doesn't fully explain who's bike had broken down.

Therefore, the words should be replaced to state things clearly.

Read more about pronouns here:

https://brainly.com/question/17393128

Select the correct answers.
Which two sentences use coordinate adjectives?
The dark, musty cellar was full of mice.
We rode down a long dirt road on a sunny morning.
The dark-haired, hazel-eyed baby was gurgling happily.
Alan is wearing a pale blue sweater.

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Answer:

The dark, musty cellar was full of mice.

The dark-haired, hazel-eyed baby was gurgling happily.

Explanation:

Coordinate adjectives are two adjectives in a row seperated by a commma. For example, in "The soft, blue carpet", 'soft' and 'blue' are coordinate adjectives.

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The two sentences that make use of coordinate adjectives are:

The dark, musty cellar was full of mice.The dark-haired, hazel-eyed baby was gurgling happily.

What are coordinate adjectives?

These are those words that apply and also gives the description of the same subjects or the same nouns.

In order to use them, they have to be separated by commas. An example is the sentence below.

She is a happy, lively, and well behaved girl.

Read more on coordinate adjectives here:

https://brainly.com/question/14242023

Someone please grammatically fix this paragraph ! Tysm :3

" Celebrating holidays in my family can be a classical yet plain at the same time. Depending whether a holiday is popular or not amongst my other relatives - my parents decide to celebrate it or not. A reason behind this is because my family isn't religious. So we aren't really needed to celebrate anything in particular. But we still celebrate for fun ! "

Happy holidays ! Tytysm again guys

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Celebrating holidays with my family can be kind of classical and plain at the same time. Depending in whether a holiday is popular or no among mi family's relatives, mi parents decide to either celebrate it or not. The reason behind this is that my family is not religious, so we aren't really in new to celebrate anything in particular (that's religiously related). But we still celebrate some holidays such as Christmas for fun!

Celebrating holidays in my family can be classical, yet plain at the same time. It depends on whether a holiday is popular or not amongst my other relatives. For example if my parents decide to celebrate the holiday or not. The reasoning behind this is due to the fact my family is not religious, so we don’t celebrate any particular holiday. We do celebrate for fun though!

plzzz answer the question - Who is St. Nicholas? in one sentence. thxx (:

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Answer:

Saint Nicholas is Santa Claus

it is said that he delivered present to every child in his town even though it was against the law to give gifts to others in that town the law enforcers tried locking everyone's doors and windows they even tried locking Santa Claus inside but somehow he always delivered all of the gifts that why there is a fable that he comes down chimneys in all shapes and sizes .

What is the motivation of Greg Heffley and Rodrick Heffley in Diary of a Wimpy Kid?

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Answer:

Greg constantly gets in trouble with his mom and dad is wary of his bully of an older brother Rodrick and is jealous of his little brother Mannys ability to get away with anything Greg is often selfish and prioritizes his own self interest, like when he allows Rowley to take the blame for bullying local kindergarteners

Explanation:

Greg gets in trouble for everything manny does and manny gets away with it because he is the youngest and Roderick is always bullying and embarrassing Greg. When their parents try to make them get along rodrick continues to bully Greg and brings Rowley into it because Greg blames him for most things because he is gullible.

Reread this excerpt from Sidney’s “Astrophil and Stella, Sonnet 19,” keeping in mind the theme: “people in love will continue loving, even if it makes them seem foolish.”

Select the two groups of lines that show the turn, or volta, in the sonnet.
When most I glory, then I feel most shame:
I willing run, yet while I run, repent.

My best wits still their own disgrace invent:
My very ink turns straight to Stella's name;

And yet my words, as them my pen doth frame,
Advise themselves that they are vainly spent.

For though she pass all things, yet what is all
That unto me, who fare like him that both
Looks to the skies and in a ditch doth fall?

Oh let me prop my mind, yet in his growth,
And not in Nature, for best fruits unfit:
"Scholar," saith Love, "bend hitherward your wit."
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Answer:

and yet my words, as them my pen doth frame,

Explanation:

"And yet my words, as them my pen doth frame" show the turn, or volta, in the sonnet.

What is a volta, in the sonnet?

Turn is the Italian word for. The volta, or turn of argument, comes before the last couplet in Shakespearean or English sonnets but between the octave and the sestet in Petrarchan or Italian sonnets. The turn, often known as the volta in sonnets, is an essential component of practically all poetry. The volta, or "turn," of the sonnet "has become an essential expectation for most short lyric poems," claims poet-critic Ellen Bryant Voigt.

The turn is "one of the most essential ways of poetic impact since Homer," according to poet-critic T.S. Eliot. The turn is described by Kim Addonizio as "the jumps from one synapse to another, one thinking to a further thought, one degree of understanding or inquiry to being in the presence of the mystery".

Learn more about volta, here:

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Quote Analysis : “ They’re all just make - believe, this dream I was having for a long time, and now I’m awake again and he’s filling the room somehow, even though we’re outside. ” page 102 Who are “ they ” ? Why are “ they ” compared to a dream ?

( book : freak the mighty )

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Answer:

imaginary person

Explanation:

they are called 'make-believe' meaning that it could be from the mind just a made up person.

they are not described showing how they could be not human or multiple people.

it could be hallucinations as she says that even though she is awake she can see them in her dream.

hope this helped

A paradox is something that sounds impossible but is actually true. Explain the meaning behind this paradox: “This was the Ghetto: where children grew down instead of up”.

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Answer:

You only get worse and not better.

You won’t be a better person just worse

A circle labeled Role of doctors points to two other circles. One circle is labeled Identifying incurable diseases. The other circle is labeled Treating curable diseases.
Choose which detail best fits under the circle that reads "Treating curable diseases.”

Some immigrants had tuberculosis when they arrived.
If immigrants had measles, doctors would treat them at a hospital on the island.
If immigrants had incurable diseases, they were sent back to their home country.
Movies were shown to immigrants at Ellis Island.

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The answer is B. Or the second question, the doctors are treating the immigrants, not sending them back. Hope this helps!
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