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Can You Tell Me Whats Wrong With This Paragraph I Really Need Help I Will Give You Points Please Help

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Answer 1

Answer:

"feeled" becomes felt, drivers needs an apostrophe, comma between astronauts and but.

Explanation:

Answer 2

Answer:

High/Speed should be “high-speed”

Feeled should be “felt”

The ? at the end should be either a “.” or a “.”

Race-car could be “racecar”

Astronauts should probably have a “,”

Od should be replaced with “odd”

Most of these should be correct.


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Exam Task

You recently ate at a new restaurant but you
were very unhappy with your meal.
Write a review of the restaurant for your school
magazine. Give your opinion and say why you
wouldn't recommend it to others. (100 words)​

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The answer is in the picture that i linked.

Which statement best explains the
idea in the underlined sentence?
Speaking up will energize your body
just as it will boost your confidence.
Energizing your body can be done only
by building your confidence.
Speaking up will boost your confidence
more than it will energize your body.
Energizing your body can be done only
by speaking up in a group.

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Answer:

Speaking up will energize your body just as it will boost your confidence.

Explanation:

I got it right on Iready.

Answer: look at the picture

Explanation: I just want to give you this, Hope this help :D

define Chronological order in your own words DONT COPY OFF THE INTERNET

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Answer:

Listing events in the time that they happened. kind of like looking a timeline ig.

Explanation:

Answer:

Chronological order is a method of describing an event or a series of events by explaining them in the order they happened, from the beginning to the end. Showing them in this way helps the reader understand exactly how something played out the way it did and identify the causes and effects of the events described.

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Which word from the sentence below is an adverb?

Bruce felt that he and Laura could speak openly since they were meeting behind closed doors and away from their colleagues.
A.
closed
B.
colleagues
C.
meeting
D.
openly

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Answer:

openly

Explanation:

Quick Tip: Adverbs usually end in ly.

5. Compare How does the narrator's understanding of Miss Lottie at
the end of the story compare to her feelings about the woman at the
beginning of the story?

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Answer:

At the beginning, Lizabeth doesn't understand why Miss Lottie has planted the marigolds and because of this, she hates them. At the end of the story, after Lizabeth has ripped out the flowers, she understands the woman's reasoning for the marigolds; she is trying to make beauty in an ugly place.

The story focuses on what element of persecution (ill-treatment)?

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Don’t click on that link it’s a scam .

Why might an author choose to use third person

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In other words, the third person point of view is attractive for fiction because of its tremendous flexibility. It allows writers to tell a story in a nearly infinite number of ways, and most writers want to tell a unique story in a unique way, after all.

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Autobiographies and memoirs count too and they are written in first person. However, third person omniscient is the most popular point of view because it allows the author to give an objective and impartial perspective to the story. This avoids biased writing, or partiality towards a certain topic, or character.

Explanation:

What other modes of transportation could adopt "smart" technology?

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Answer:

self driving cars, high speed rail networks, Next GEN GPS devices, and Gyroscopic Vehicles.

Explanation:

Which sentence in the final paragraph is an example of a sentence fragment?
A.
Sentence 2 is a sentence fragment.
B.
Sentence 3 is a sentence fragment.
C.
Sentence 1 is a sentence fragment.
D.
There is no sentence fragment in the final paragraph.

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A collection of words that reads like a sentence is called a sentence fragment. It will have a capital letter at the beginning and punctuation at the conclusion.

What is a good illustration of a sentence fragment?

Here, a clear sentence fragment is showcased: in rebuttal to the rain. Because of the rain is not a coherent cognition in and of itself. Because of the downpour, we are left wondering what occurred.

A fragment paragraph is what?

Whole sentences are not fragments. Fragments are typically portions of sentences that have split off from the main clause. Eliminating the period that separates the fragment from the main phrase is one of the simplest methods to fix them.

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Answer:

1st Quotation → People have individual purposes that they should be free to pursue despite the actions of others.

2nd Quotation → Rushing to pursue something when the circumstances are not right can lead to disastrous results.

Explanation:

Looking the given quotations, you will discover that the explanations connected to them are correct.

The first quotation talks about one not keeping pace with his companions due to another drummer he hears. He is expected to step into his own music which he hears. This then means everyone definitely have individual purposes in life and should be free to pursue it. The actions of others shouldn't interfere or influence such individual purposes.

The second quotation refers to not doing something when the conditions or circumstances suitable for such thing has not yet being realized or else it can be shipwrecked (disastrous). This is what the explanation also refers to.

Do you trust most of what the mass media sells? Explain.

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Answer:

no

Explanation:

because they can steal you money or fraud can occr

HELLO!!! Can someone do me a favor and make a thesis statement for "Beauty magazines should stop photoshopping models." thank you!!!

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Answer:

Too many images of models are photoshopped to look like society's unrealistic standards of beauty.

Explanation:

The media tend to tell women how they should look by providing pictures that aren't even real

Hey everyone! Hows your day? I just pulled my tooth out but i had to throw it away because im to old for the tooth fairy lol!

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Answer:

my day has been good

Explanation:

Analyze the speaker in the image above. What does Sandra's slouching posture signal to the audience?
a.
She is confident.
b.
She is credible.
c.
She is unsure of herself.
d.
She is making an important point.

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Answer:

C she is unsure about herself meaning she is not confident and people would more likley listen to someone who has posture and confidence in what they say.

Answer:  The correct answer is c. She is unsure of herself.

Explanation:

Slouching instead of keeping proper posture makes the audience feel that the speaker is not confident of their subject matter or delivery.

Which of the following quotes are examples of irony in the text? (SELECT THREE)
"I'm seventeen and I'm crazy. My uncle says the two always go together. When people ask your age, he said, always say seventeen and insane."
"You know, I'm not afraid of you... So many people are. Afraid of firemen, I mean."
"Do you ever read any of the books you burn?" He laughed. "That's against the law!"
"My uncle was arrested another time-did I tell you?-for being a pedestrian."
He wore his happiness like a mask and the girl had run off across the lawn with the mask and there was no way going to knock on her door and ask for it back.

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Answer:

"My uncle was arrested another time-did I tell you?-for being a pedestrian."

"You know, I'm not afraid of you... So many people are. Afraid of firemen, I mean."

"I'm seventeen and I'm crazy. My uncle says the two always go together. When people ask your age, he said, always say seventeen and insane."

Explanation:

Irony is a literary term that is used to convey the opposite meaning of what is intended, usually to create humor or emphasis. There are different types of irony such as:

1. Dramatic irony: where the audience knows the outcome, but the actors do not.

2. Verbal irony: when a person says something totally different from what they mean

3. Tragic Irony: this is a type of dramatic irony, but the audience is aware of an incoming tragedy.

ideas for and against online learning argumentative essay

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heres a few examples

CONS OF ONLINE LEARNING:

high chances of cheating

lack of social activity.

isolation. (staying in room all the time)

possibly healtheir enviornment

PROS:

Children with bad anxiety, specifically social, will be more comfortable.

For those with bad sleeping schedules and sleep disorders can sleep in and have a better mental health overall.

Can someone help me with this? Which words create a feeling of tension? And explain how these words create tension.

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Answer:

exploded,blasting, lurching, threw

Explanation:

exploded- something blowing up/being destroyed

blasting- blow up or break apart (something solid) with explosives

lurching- (in context to the floor) creeping up

threw- propel (something) with force through the air by a movement of the arm and hand

Stranded
ReadWorks

It had been three days, and we were starting to feel helpless. We had already used most of our resources and knew that if anyone was to come and look for us, it would take them weeks to find us. It was a relief that Andrew was starting to feel better after being dehydrated. We were all happy to have started a fire so that we could now drink clean water. I decided it was time to start searching the island for food and resources. I knew I wasn’t the group leader, but I was going to take charge.

When I told Max that I would head out east toward the beaches, he said I was making a big mistake and that we all needed to stay together. I disagreed with him and told him that we eventually needed to search the island to see what we could use or if anyone else occupied this land that could help us call for rescue.

Jamie and Shannon went with me to search. We walked about three miles and started to hear a sound coming from a distance. We didn’t want to get much closer because we thought it would be better to get others to help us. So, we headed back and told the others. We agreed to return to the spot in the morning. That night, as I slept under the stars, I felt a sense of hope for the first time since being stranded.

Questions:

What is the genre and how do you know?

What does the word occupied mean in paragraph 2?


What is the main idea of the story?



What is the author’s purpose in the story?


What is the author’s point of view? (1st, 2nd, 3rd person)

What is the author’s tone? What word choices helped you determine the tone?

What tools do you think you would need if you were ever stranded somewhere?

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Answer:

At least 25 people have died and more than 800 have been sickened by the mysterious illness, health officials said. The travel restrictions imposed on Wuhan were extended to at least four more cities.

Explanation:

how does carson's book differ from other scientific texts written around the same period?
a. carson’s book uses more logos and ethos than other scientific texts
b. carson’s book credits experts with their contributions more frequently than other scientific texts.
c. carson’s book disscusses DDT and pesticides in more technical detail than other scientific texts.
d. carson’s book uses more pathos than other scientific texts.

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Answer:

d...

Explanation:

Tips on sneaking out? Best gets brainliest!!

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Answer:

i have plenty. :)

Explanation:

if there are any alarms for doors in your house, make sure you disable them (with caution and if you can), and try to open the doors quietly.

you  also need to think of the obstacles between you and the door. where are your house's loud spots? what are your parents habits? is there any chance your parents will wake up at the exact moment you're trying to sneak out?

presumably you're sneaking out to meet up with friends, or head to a party. make sure your plans are the same and you're not going to sneak out and find yourself alone. keep up by texting or something, and plan a convenient meeting place for everyone (if there isn't one already.)

aim for dark areas, or try to get picked up in a car far a couple blocks away from where you live. stay out of sight and you most likely won't get caught.

if you have any pets, make sure to keep them away or try to convince your parents to have them sleep in their room.

a good method when you're first sneaking out is to [fake] use bathroom. flush the toilet, run the water, and shuffle back and forth to the bathroom. this will make them less alarmed when you get up. also, try to step as lightly as possible if you're about to leave. be extra cautious around squeaky floorboards and doors.

if its in the night time, make sure to put your pajamas on when you walk back in AFTER sneaking out. you can easily just say you were out for a walk and they'll most likely believe you.

i gave a lot of info, so hope this helps!

good luck and stay safe!! <3

"injustice anywhere is a threat to justice everywhere." Do you agree with Dr. King? Why or why not? Explain and support your . Response.

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Answer:

I do agree with Dr. King

Explanation:

Injustice has always been a problem, if it's not solved then and there it's going to eventually spread and then no justice will be served.

Answer:

i agree

Explanation:

Injustice has always been a problem, if it's not solved then and there it's going to eventually spread and then no justice will be served.

How to support this sentence
President John F. Kennedy delivered his inaugural address in which he announced that "we shall pay any price, bear any burden, meet any hardship, support any friend, oppose any foe to assure the survival and success of liberty" ( John F. Kennedy 4 )

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Answer:

In order to support this sentence, you would have to find evidence showing how Kennedy was for the people and other things he has done or sacrificed in order to "achieve liberty".

Explanation:

What do the tone and perspective of these excerpts reveal about the narrators’ attitudes toward being different? Select three options.

Being different from everyone around you can be hard.
Being different from everyone around you is a fact of life.
Being different from everyone around you is fun and exciting.
Being different from everyone around you is everyone's goal.
Being different from everyone around you can cause separation.

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Answer:

he correct answer is the following:

Being different from everyone around you can be hard.

Being different from everyone around you is a fact of life.

Being different from everyone around you can cause separation.

"Does My Head Look Big in This?" is a book written by Australian author Randa Abdel-Fattah that was first published in August, 2005. It tells the story of a teen girl who decides to wear the hijab full time, and the consequences of making that decision. "Persepolis" is a graphic novel written by Iranian author Marjane Satrapi that was first published in June, 2007. It tells the story of Satrapi and how she grew up from being a child to a rebellious teenager while being Muslim.

The excerpt shows how both stories are linked in how they represent the attitude of young girls toward being different. It can scary and isolated to be the only one on the bus wearing a hijab, and how that single fact was so relevant to the narrator, that she had to remember to take it off before getting on the bus.

Explanation:

Answer:

A. B. and E.

Explanation:

IM JUST..... HIM

6. What can you infer that the author thinks about cyberbullying being a crime?

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Answer:

I dont see the article but using common sense, “Cyberstalking” is online harassment using an electronic communication device. It is one way to violate California's stalking laws. ... If you violate a restraining order, injunction or other court order by stalking someone, you can be charged with a felony, which is punishable by up to four years in prison

Answer:

What author of what?

Explanation:


How does the subject shift in paragraph 4 contribute to thedevelopment of the central ideas of the text? Cite evidence from the
text in your answer.

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Answer:

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Explanation:

Rather than creating a country that was ruled by a king, the Founding Fathers wanted to create a governemnt that was ______
and ________
HELP ASAP!!!!

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Answer:

Limited and self-governed?

Explanation:

I think sooo

How was the strategy used in the DayQuil & NyQuil commercial

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Answer:

text, lighting and facial expressions.

Explanation:

Dayquil and Nyquil using its elements

plz help me i need this done soon

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Answer:

What do you need help with?

Explanation:

Answer:

whats your question my son

Explanation:

what are the challenges of being a leader

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Answer:

The fact that you have accepted a leadership role is a change all to itself, but everyday is filled with possibilities for change. Some of them are things that you have chosen and others are the luck of the draw. Your role as a leader is to not get off balance because of change. You either have to see it coming and prepare or be able to handle it on the fly because both things are inevitable.

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the challenges of being a leader are so many different things. for an example, you’re basically a role model to so many people. your actions defines the person you are. if you do something wrong, it shows that it’s okay for others to do so. it’s hard to be a leader. you can’t make any mistakes or else it would be very bad

7. When Jackie was inducted into the baseball Hall of Fame, who did he ask to
stand with him?

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1962 , December 5 2007 and pee wee Reese’s standed with him
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